Reviews for Broken Serenade
Lili Bibi chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Apple Yumi 94 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
cute n sad! 8/10*s
LyraMusica chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Awww, such a sweet story! I loved it! If only this happened in the show! It would have been great!
Oyako-sama chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Very good! I wonder why in so many fanfics I read, Tenten slaps Neji... weird... XD
asdg chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Fake Bliss chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
That was so sweet. I loved it. -
Woopa chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Aww! so cute! *sob*
mai.sturrrr chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
really good.

sad though ]:
too-much-romance chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
Hm. Dang good. But this is you we're talking about so I doubt that'll cause much surprise.

Hm. Well, the ending could've been better. End it right where it says ""I'm sorry," he apologized." and it'll probably have a better effect. *nods* But the scene and her feelings...very (what's the SAT word?) volatile. *nods* Not sure if that's a good or a bad thing, but it really makes the reader wonder...and I love doing that.

Please continue your wonderful work, Thorn-senpai! (Can I call you that? Thorn-senpai?)
Tenten rules chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
Daen it! I'm crying now. I hate when people make Neji or Tenten or both Die. I love ur story it was so good
Danst chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
I thought he was going to die... I hate it when people make Neji die.
catilena1890 chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
*sobs*, That has got to be the prettiest story I ever read. It made me cry. Ironically enough I was listening to the song "Teddy Bear" by smile d.k. while reading this. This is going onto my favorites.
MirokuHoushi471 chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
this was a great story
Neopuff chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
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