Reviews for Untouched
poetryismyfirstlove chapter 14 . 8/20/2013
finished this in one sitting, and i just love it! my only fault is that i found out about this years late. but this story will stand time and change, and will still be great for anyone who would chance upon it.
what i wouldn't give to have something like this played out in the actual show. the feelings, the words and slow seduction, aargh! one of the best trories I've read. they were still in character but more accepting of each other. the build-up felt natural and just right. i like the fact that they were honest with each other. none of the angst of confusion, saying things you don't mean and the drama of other girls getting in the way. thank you for this masterpiece)
DevotedSerenity19 chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Tristan is such a dedicated gentleman. Love the first chapter
people-alwayz-leave chapter 14 . 8/2/2012
The more I read the more I realize that I can't have just one favorite Trory if you keep writing these like this! I absolutely LOVED this story!
people-alwayz-leave chapter 7 . 7/30/2012
My favorite chapter by far!
Gilmoregirls1197 chapter 14 . 6/27/2012
Great
roganjalex chapter 13 . 4/25/2012
cool
roganjalex chapter 14 . 4/23/2012
amazing as usally
Heather chapter 14 . 12/12/2011
Even though this is an older story, it has to be one of the best and most well-written Trorys that I have ever read. It's a believable story line and you have the bantering and wit plus the falling in love done perfectly without breaking the character. Fantastic job.
Falling Angel chapter 14 . 6/22/2011
This isn't the first time I read this... But I don't know what name I used so it is probably diffrent... I tend to change the name based on my mood... Anyways, I've been trying to find a was to discribe just what it is that I love about this story but I cannot find the right words though I'm gonna try anyways...

The style of writing is so diffrent and it draws you in, connects you to the characters and then the plot line is so unique and you can just feel the connection between the two... When she says "I can't let him go alone" the comment seems as natural to the reader as it is to her... Seriously, this story is amazing and something to be very proud of...
Holding on a little longer chapter 14 . 3/14/2011
This is outstanding, seriously, I don't know what to say beyond that it is moving in an odd way... Or maybe it's not odd, I'm not good at getting thoughts out of my head... You are honestly an amazing writer...
Music girl2121 chapter 14 . 8/3/2010
WOW! I love this story! One of my favorites no doubt! Keep up the amazing work!
rachelpuckhappygirl.mhhm chapter 14 . 6/2/2010
That's it?

I feel robbed.

But I still love it, so I guess it's ok.

*wink*

Lurve-This. mhhm. Tis the truth, much like Puckleberry. D
rachelpuckhappygirl.mhhm chapter 11 . 6/2/2010
yay!

sorry that this is all i can say. so sorry.

YAY!
rachelpuckhappygirl.mhhm chapter 9 . 6/2/2010
YAY!

I can honestly say I wasn't sure of this story at first, but now I am in LOVE!

D

love!
dracosnumber1girl chapter 14 . 5/31/2010
Absolutely wonderful. SO good!
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