|Reviews for Damaged|
| blisblop chapter 3 . 3/1
Excuse me,Harry has faith Hedwig will find him anywhere ? She didn't and now it's too late for magic to cure his nerves (maybe) so I doubt he's gonna have faith, even if she couldn't get in the hospital she could go for help. It's outrageous to claim they "never thought" his family might hurt him. Dombledore (at least) knew he was kept under the stairs, his acceptance letter to Hogwarts was addressed there. Hagrid saw how his family responded to magic, hiding him from school Medic, Pomfry, would have diagnosed malnutrition ect. if it was lifelong. Plus now Vernon is a lush? I'm sure what with the lady spying from across the street they would know alot about how he was treated, alot. No, some of them knew alot about it. So , one might want to say they never thought Veron would be brave enough to hurt him too bad ect. its bizzare however he could be hurt that bad with no magic alarm going isn't a might wanna add something to get around that point. I guess its silly to be writing this so long after this was written as you might not have any interest anymore but it just popped out. Do you still write? I'm sorry about the spelling mistakes, i'm writing this fast in the dark. I'll stop critiqing cause it's so old but if you want me to do something new , if , I'm not saying you should or will want it/my opinion. So I'm 1957 at hotmail dot com. Thank You.
| Kitty Savella chapter 20 . 2/3
Lovely story. Great read.
| Anna chapter 2 . 1/19
I could tell you were American by the explanation of the accident. For Uncle Vernon to swerve into the opposite lane and an oncoming car to hit Harry's side (the passenger side) he would have had to have been driving on the right side of the road. In England we drive on the left side.
| Peacock Slayer chapter 11 . 10/20/2013
love it but i couldn't find the link to the explicit version :(
| MelaArtii chapter 11 . 10/11/2013
I'm loving it. Could you tell me where I could see the more explicit version of this chapter?
| XxZessxX chapter 20 . 9/15/2013
Great story. I really enjoyed reading it. The idea is really good. I never read something like this before with Harry beeing paralysed. I think you managed to capture the characteres of everyone quite well and I really liked the plot. And the ending, for once not a big battle but a simple short blast and suddenly it's over.
| delia cerrano chapter 20 . 8/14/2013
Oh that was nice...better than nice...excellent! Well plotted, well written, had humor, romance, mystery...I'm impressed all over again. Going to see if I can find the sequel I read about.
| XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 20 . 7/12/2013
| Jennifer chapter 19 . 6/17/2013
Well hello there ! :)
I've finished reading your story and i have to admit i absolutely love it ! Its great :D
| charm13insomnia chapter 20 . 5/1/2013
| Anon chapter 20 . 4/29/2013
I'd never read a fanfiction more than once before. I never really care to because it would be boring.
This is the third time I've read this one though. (:
| jules3677 chapter 20 . 4/4/2013
What a wonderful 20 chapters. Liked how you didn't make the "till death" fight with Voldemort the whole focus of your story. You wrote a nice Severus. He had the harshness & a marshmellow center. Your description of Harry's accident & his subsequent medical attention was also well written. Harry's recovery was also covered well. Really enjoyed reading your story. Thankyou.
| SlytherinSoul14 chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
| heksie chapter 20 . 2/12/2013
very nice fic.
| A Cumberbatch Of Cookies chapter 20 . 1/23/2013
Well I do like this story but I have one negative remark about the plot.
Surely people would have been searching for a cure for ages but the moment Harry and Severus becomes a couple he finds it...