What a story! Beautiful writing and the emotions really got me good.

Wow what a story and what a place to end! Frustrating but I recognize it's to test whether the reader has faith in Neji and his decisions... And I doooooo T-T I will come back to this story again, I can feel it

Marvellous plot, I never thought of how this would work! It would be nice to see how fast Neji adjusted to Kiba’s and Shino’s training regime (also, I am glad you chose those two characters specifically)

Good chapter, I specially enjoyed the conversation between Hisashi and Neji, including the tension around them.

Oh wait. . you said there'll be no Romance. Darn. That's my thing.

Wow wow
Deep!
Painful and sad. Another blind fic for me... Reading fics with blind characters makes me feel blind...
So Hiashi said you can have one month to live and then you will be killed? Or one month and then you must seppuku?
Enter Hinata !

I quite enjoyed reading this story as Neji is one of my favourite characters and this concept was different and interesting. However, I wish there was a proper ending to the fight and to know what happened up until his death to have some closure. As it is now it feels I finished and like I went through all of that with Neji only to be unsure of what actually happened to him and how everyone reacted. I would have liked to see this in the ending

You're the absolute worst, you're the scum of the earth and I hate you. You didn't even give us the satisfaction of seeing him win. Amazing story, I love it.

Here comes the waterworks...

this story is amazing! one of the few instances I've seen where an ambiguous ending actually works

There is a weird satisfaction in the ending, if I'm being perfectly h

hm very interesting premise, i look forward to seeing how you develop it!

This was great! I wish you had made it a little longer, especially if you aren't writing a sequel or epilogue. Did Neji succeed or was it all in vain?

The end came a bit abruptly. I'm not sure how I feel about such an open end in this case.
However, I really loved the rest of the story. It was incredibly heartbreaking, but beautiful in the way you portrayed Neji coming to terms with his fate. You did all the characters justice.

so you just end it? Well I cannot say I am not disappointed but the travel here was pleasant nonetheless.