|Reviews for Time Out|
| Melampode chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
First off, I have to say it's SO refreshing to find a fic involving Max and Monica that doesn't fling them both into all sorts of improbable romantic angsting and pining. *laugh* But not only that, you manage to expand upon and explore both Max and Monica's characters while keeping them believably IC. Very enjoyable read! :)
| Salacassera chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
This was a very enjoyable read - you have a really good grasp of Max and Monica's characters. The dialogue sounded perfectly like them.
| Oracle Master the Defiled Fork chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
Hey newbie Oracle Master here, this is my second Dark Cloud 2 fic review. Come to think of it, this is my second review period. My first was 4 Gamertcm's Talismans of Time.
I really liked this one just because i thought provided some insight into Max and Monica's thoughts in a way no in-game cutscene ever did. I think you should continue this and expand on it. Just make sure the rest is as good as this.