Reviews for Deadly Devotion |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ok Good beginning to a sequel! Now we need to get some more chapters. A quiet nationwide alert for Naomi needs to be sent to hospitals along with her picture and Blair's. Mention of the problem Munchausen's Syndrome by Proxy as well as the poison used, the food, the years of childhood problems need to be addressed or Naomi might be able to talk her way out of it. Also that a warrant has been issued for Attempted Murder of a Police Officer which makes it a felony. Good job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon cant must be soon, love the story, can't waint to see what happens next, will jim find blair soon or will blairs mother prevent it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ew that evil witch. Some one should do that to her see how she likes it. Good story. Please up date soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chilling. More, please? Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The women's crazy! I hope Jim can find him... and soon. Please write more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow pls update soon and maybe with longer chapters. can't wait for the rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story (and the previous one too). I hope you will continue and add more chapters. I especially like how you are using Munchausen's Syndrome. I could see the character of Namoi being somewhat like that, in a dark and twisted way. Cheers! |