Reviews for Butterfly
LecterGirl32 chapter 13 . 1/30/2012
This was a good story with a different twist. I would love to see how it ends.
zsazsa555 chapter 13 . 8/11/2011
Pembry is one of the officers that was guarding while hannibal was in the cage. Any true Hannibal fan should know that.

Anyway, I love this story. I do want to know who abused her though. I hope Dr. Brown gets what he deserves, and that matt changes his mind about everything.


Serously, dont kill them. That would make this story not as awesome.

No offense.

I like that Melissa is a cannibal too now. It would be totally ironic if Matt became one too. *wink wink*

Cant wait til the next chapter!

May the Lecters be with you!
girldoctor chapter 13 . 3/3/2011
This story was interesting. A very dark story . Kept me entertained though ;)
inpradadevil chapter 6 . 7/2/2009


Matt ? I cant believe it

Really, this is getting juicy (?


Mischa Nina S.
inpradadevil chapter 3 . 7/2/2009
Normally I dont like gore or stupid violence, But i found this chapter very... interesting

Really interesting, I like the description of Melissas thougts, her reactions, the atmosphere, I really liked it...

I find her as extrange mixture between Hannibal and Clarice, and I love it...

Keep on

Mischa Nina S.
inpradadevil chapter 2 . 7/2/2009
I am getting even more excited about Melissa

She is just like her father and I love it !

“Thank you, moron.”

“Never mind , weirdo. That was quite entertaining . ”

“Keep it to yourself or I’ll kick your fat ass.”

“Keep dreaming bitch”

“You want to test me?”

“You want to die?”

( typical conversation between my cousin and me)

Just look at him! He’s old and definitely unattractive

( HE IS NOT OLD !... he is a mature person, which is different)


Mischa Nina S.
inpradadevil chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Wow, I really like this story

somehow I understand Melissa ... I liked her reaction I felt they were very accurate for her character

You write very well ! English is not my first language too )

I will be reviewing


Mischa Nina S.
GuesssWho chapter 13 . 10/14/2006
Officer Pembry! Cool!
tina chapter 12 . 3/24/2006
please do con. love you story great never read anything like it want to konw what come next.
Katherine chapter 12 . 10/24/2005
I MISSED YOU! :big humongous hug: How have you been? I wa sos excited when I saw that u updated...and ocne agin, have written an AMAZING chapter! Can't wait to hear more!
Lecterclaricelover chapter 11 . 9/14/2005
I like the story, please update it. I wanna know what happens next.
Katherine chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
I MISSED YOU! So glad you're back :-D Excellent chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep going!
Dinloth chapter 10 . 8/19/2005
I'm very sorry fo such a delay. My inspiration flew away and left me alone. But I have nearly two pages of new chapter so don't worry I'll finish very soon. I had to do a little research about death penalty in USA beacuse in my country it's forbidden. please be patience I promise I will update anytime now so keep your fingers crossed for me. I love you guys.
Jason Y. Insane chapter 2 . 8/1/2005
oh yes yes. Chapter 2 get's better, great job Dinloth. I first didn't understand it and I'm sorry. I did not read the summary but read the story. The first chapter was quite boring but it gets better and better each chapter.


Review my story Klown I: Chronicles based on Silence of The Lambs.
Katherine chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
YAY! I screamed (literally) after reading this chapter. Yeah same as JahWarrior...I LOVED the red line "line" lol...that was clever. I also liked the poem...its very hard to rhyme, and you did a fine job :-D I love how easily he is able to take that poem and run it through his mind, seeking out a secret message or a code that his daughter was trying to leave him perhaps...I think that's what you wre etrying to suggest? Hey can u bring Clarice back into the mix at some point? I wanna see what's going on with that..haha..."sex toy" of his! ;-) Keep it going!
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