Reviews for Honour and Sincerity: The Crimson Guardians
ze-poodle chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
I like it.
Slayerboi chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
i only browsed over it, but from what i have seen it was good. i will read thoroughly when i have time. a haiku is a japanese style of poem in 3 lines. the first line has 5 syllables, the second line has 7 syllables, and the third line has 5 syllables again. if you can change that then it would be much better and much more fitting.
Pvt. Harrison chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
This is pretty good. I really like your story To Ourselves We Must be True and this really complements it. So no flames from me I think you're a pretty good author
grayangle chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
I like this little bit of fluff to go with one of the BEST Warhammer 40,0 stories I have ever read. Are you planning to write something like your last story some time soon?
liljimmyurine chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
Not Bad, not bad at all. Very concise and close to the Warhammer 40K spirit, with a fairly deep history that sounds like feudal Japan in most aspects. One discrepency I saw was that Yoshimune's death poem was not a haiku. I liked your Crimson Guardian's story a lot, and hoped for a sequel. Keep up the good work
Ehkayay chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
Read this, then 'To ourselves...', and I am kicking myself for not having read it sooner. Informative and well-written, but not at all boring.

Glad to have read it.

Liked the little side-references to those vile Marines Malevolent - will a future story involving Captain Vinyard be in the plans?