|Reviews for The Moon & Tail|
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/4/2012
can you writhe more on this store please.
| Jen chapter 3 . 10/15/2008
i really like ur story keep up the work cause u know it gets alot intresting when you put all ur heat in to somethen
| Loopy Looney Charny chapter 2 . 6/17/2008
heyy...dis story i sgr8 so far...culd u plz continue it? i really want to read more...it would b gr8ly appreciated...
| AnimeQueen48 chapter 2 . 10/7/2005
This is socoolIloveitsobadandIcan'twaitformore! *takes deep breath* srry. Now, Vegeta is the new keeper Golden Crystal, isn't he?
| Taeniaea chapter 2 . 8/13/2005
I Love Chapter:2 Plz Plz Update It Soon!
| Taeniaea chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
I Love Chapter:1!
| animechick chapter 2 . 7/12/2005
| Cami Binion chapter 2 . 6/21/2005
this is kind of a wierd story. are you writing this off the top of your head? i think that you should write it on paper first so that you can see how you want the chapters to go, it might be easier and that way you can proofread it and have someone else look it over too before you post it. update soon
| Angelic Sazuka chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
Like, very much. please update soon. i'd like to know what happens. thank you.
| Silver Moon Goddess1 chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
i dont mean to be rude but i couldnt even get through most of the chapter without a few things hindering my enjoyment factor. First of all do you mean Beryl? Or did you create a new baddie named Barrel? i was honestly confused. Secondly, (again not to be rude), but do you know of anything type of sentences other than simple sentences? For example "Vegeta was flying and landed in the park. Looking at the sky that had no moon." These two sentences could easily be combined. i am sorry if you feel i am bashing you, as far as i know you are a young kid who is a novice writer and i apologize for all of the above if you are, but if you do not fit that category i suggest you reconsider rewriting this chapter. i hope this story turns out well though, i enjoy a well written sm/dbz crossover especially one between vegeta and usagi
*silver moon goddess
| MunksAngelQueen2010 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
this story is also good i hope that when you continue these chapters that you have fun doing this stories cause stories are suppose to be fun not dull enjoy writing them