Reviews for Quality Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Overall, I think this came out pretty well. This could honestly be a real book if it weren't a fanfiction because of how well written it is. I'm reviewing on this chapter since I already reviewed on chapter 17 haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just one thing. I hope that butter was dairy free. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter the most of all of them so far. I loved the serene and peaceful scene with Raven's new emotion because of how calm it was! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still curious what Beast Boy said to Cyborg . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oml this chapter is golden . This is really awesome so far, I just sometimes get confused with the time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was the funniest chapter yet; I laugh each time i read this how in the world would cyborg be so dirty minded come to think of it he could my cheeks are hurting i cant stop grinning and laughing and giggling |
![]() ![]() ![]() Screw this story. You wrote Raven as solve paragon of virtue and belittle BeastBoy. The entire time Raven is a bitch to him and she never realizes it and we are supposed to just think 'yeah it is all his fault'. Well I tried to finish this, it had a good topic but the way you write this slow drawl of nothing happened has made me just skip the last half of this chapter. There is no pay off to them going to the mirror because Raven didnt learn shit. Every time it seems like maybe she would grow as a person you just say ' oh look Beast Boy did something normal and Raven looses her shit amd for some reason he is the one to apologize' im going to read the last chapter but god damn this experience was wasted on a hopeful wish of something fucking happening |
![]() ![]() ![]() I gotta say reading this my mind was constantly shifting between the original titans for the serious situations and their Titans Go! variants for the comedic escapades. can get a little confusing from time to time. but still a good read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I've always liked the idea of a good friendship between them, as apposed to the traditional BBRae. This story represents that concept well. Very funny and fun to read! I would definitely read a part two! |
![]() ![]() Great book |
![]() ![]() Great job on all the action |
![]() ![]() You know what, whenever i think which writers are my favourite your name is going to pop into my head. Seriously this one of the most interesting and amazing stories i have read and i have read a lot of stories so that's saying something... love ur writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t she just fly to the closet |
![]() ![]() ![]() All I can think about is Beast Boy yelling BURP on the top of his lungs |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the jokes |