Reviews for Tenebrae |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow! I'm really enjoying this a lot. The personalities of the characters are spot on, the plot is engaging, and the sex scene was totally hot without being over-the-top smutty. I can't wait 'til you add to it. |
![]() ![]() uhm, not to be too picky but Air Force One is almost the same size of a Boeing 747 and i don't think a USS carrier would be able to manage that weight, much less size. Ashley would be more likely to catch a ride with Marine One, helicopter version of Air Force One. |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() who ho, go Leon! Very nice story, hope you can update soon. |
![]() ![]() Urm, wow. That bumped up a notch. "implosion" was a very good name for this chapter... I really do like the overall style that you're writing with, especialy during the "Scenes from a Waking" chapters, where it would skip through the game, and reveal what's Leon thinking. Also I like the aftermath of RE4, where they are quarintined, which is a little more real than other post RE4 fics. Overall a really well written, well done Fic. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the fantastic work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "A sad, lonely tub of Pepto Bismol." Best. Line. Ever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Fangirl squee* Hooray for lemons! But, that aside, you really have a gift for understanding and recreating human emotions and desires - Leon's agony especially regarding the whole situation was very vivid. “Wow,” She said, blinking. “Wow. Leon, what just happened?” “I think we had sex.” Heh. I see his sarcastic comments from RE4 haven't deserted him. Excellent chapter; I enjoyed reading this very much. Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whe, more chapters! I haven't read many fics dealing with the after effects of RE4 - it's refreshing to finally find one that does. I'm so glad Leon and Ashley have finally been reunited, and I can't wait to read more. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job this chapter :) I am really enjoying this story so far of course I stated that in my last review. Hope to see more from you soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Keep going |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep going me like |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep it going i want to see why the rating went up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Thats one hell of a story. It was detailed, made perfect sense, and had no errors at all. Keep going! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story so far. After beating Resident Evil 4 just recently ( I know I know I was SO far behind and yet I am a major survival horror fan) I became interested in the idea of Leon/Ashley. ( I have a plan for one I would like to write but I don't know when or if I will) so I went looking to see what I could find to read. Your story was a surprising and enjoyable one. Leon was portrayed well as was Ashley. Even though I enjoyed the games ending I like where your fic is headed so don't keep me waiting TOO long for an update ok! :P :D Can't wait to read more of this. Take care! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been reading some RE4 fics 'cuz my friend just beat the game, and this is really good, I'd like to see more! I hope you update again soon! |