|Reviews for Tenebrae|
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/7/2008
...damn. i don't know if you care to read all these reviews, but shit. when i was surfing for RE fanfics, i didn't expect to find something this fucking GOOD. my opinion will be drowned in the oceans of internet bullshit, but i just wanted to say, this is maybe the best fanfic of ANYTHING i've ever read. damn. a damn fine job.
| kc-archive chapter 18 . 4/26/2008
GODDAMN YOU, DON'T YOU DARE KILL IT. Seriously, sequels suck, and this story has closure. If you make a sequel, the closure will be shattered and will subsequently leave many (satisfied!) readers confused and frustrated.
That's a compliment, by the way. The story was so good that anything else simply doesn't measure up. Good job on making me never want to touch another Leon x Ashley fic that doesn't meet the ridiculously high bar you've set. Curses.
I guess I'm pretty slow on the uptake, in retrospect. I got the game for Christmas '07 and beat it January '08. The Wii version was amazing, largely due to the fact that several gestures with the Wii remote were wildly inappropriate and disturbingly hilarious.
But on to the story. I like how it was disjointed, jumping from in-game events to original scenarios to in-game events to a final original scenario, because it threw me off for a second before I realized what you were doing, you sly dog. Also, the sex was great. And the violence.
Another little detail I really liked was the fact that you kept Leon so...PAINFULLY corny. His humor is so dry, and I love how you allowed him to keep conforming to that personality facet while still making him seem awesome throughout it all. Trust me, a couple lines of his both in here and in the game had me snickering and facepalming, because Jesus. "Where's everyone going? Bingo?" Right, Leon. You're a charmer.
Then again, I don't know if you were ACTUALLY doing that on purpose or if you generally thought that those lines were witty and comedy gold and such, and in which case, I am deeply sorry for offending you. (lol.)
And now, to end this novel-length review on a good note: DON'T WRITE A FUCKING SEQUEL.
Also, great story. I haven't read one of its caliber or one that actually involved me for quite some time. So I thank you for it.
| just a guy that likes re4 chapter 7 . 4/19/2008
great story hope to see ending soon
| thedarkeststar chapter 18 . 4/17/2008
interesting story and a wierd author note but hey go with it good work
| israelbauman chapter 18 . 3/15/2008
I'm amazed that you've only recieved 14 reviews, I really enjoyed the story and appreciate how you kept everyone in character for it. Hope to read some more from you soon.
Best regards, israelbauman
PS: I really wanted to steal that 'hooker in trunk' joke from you, but it wouldn't work, I own a cargo van so I have a dead harem back there! HA! I am the king of no class!
| Major-003 chapter 18 . 2/12/2008
I must say, you are an excellent writer. It's rare to see a good Leon/Ashley story, seeing as Ashley's initial personality seems to be very annoying and clingy. I simply love it when writers elaborate more on any official game character's personality; it gives them far more depth. And your storyline, although confined to only a few settings, has a wonderful plot and perfectly done detail. But above all, what's really a necessary element in any sotry is emotion. Your fiction has plenty of it. Excellent job, my man!
P. S. - I'd highly recommend a continuation of this story (if you're up for doing that). Maybe another Leon and Ashley vs. Umbrella/Plagas, or something? I don't know, but I do know that are brilliant. D
| CorinneQ chapter 17 . 1/2/2008
I was intensely intrigue when reading this story. The reality of the sensual tension which eventually overpowered into something far more erotic between the characters from the close environment making
it more intriguing for the reader. It was like the, “Romeo and Juliet” of government relationships without the tragic ending. It has its sweet and playful moments from the younger character bringing a little light of sweet vulnerability out of the more serious other. Finding myself smiling, the humor that came along with it made the characters more appealing and likable. The details in which you use, made the imagination know exactly what was coming out of the writing and into a image. Though tragically, the sudden twist and outburst of the younger character made her unlikable and made me felt she was younger than her age. Uncomfortably ,it made that situation feel as she was trying to pull him in than letting things go as they should. Unfittingly, the realism didn’t quite make it as even if this situation really occurred, I doubt that an agent would ever marry or loose his job over something more secret than his identity for a desk job or anything similar to that extent. Personally, out of such a good story thus far , I would have not expected a, “happily ever after” sudden story twist between the two characters. But both knowing something forbidden should of just stayed under the sheets ( no pun indented), and left their separate ways; fun while it lasted but understand it wouldn’t do. If I’m reading it correctly my statement remains on that part. Other than a sudden flaw, it’s was very nice to read. I think you did a great job on this and I’m glad you decided to write a plot based on them too. I’ll be looking out for more if you do ever decide to!
| Pretty Racing chapter 19 . 12/31/2007
i just read through the entire story, and it was amazing! :D i do like how you've characterized Leon, and his even Snarkier remarks during the Waking chapters. so job well done! :D
| KittenKez chapter 19 . 12/31/2007
I LOVE this fic! It's great reali funny, romantic and also horrific! Great read can't wait for the update! AND SOON!
| 010127 chapter 19 . 8/6/2007
nice story, it's great to see some LeonXAshley fics.
| CrystalMoonlightII chapter 4 . 6/12/2007
I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to your story.
I've just read a few more chapters.
its very acurate and descriptive, I really find it interesting and its one of those things that makes my life a little more interesting. I'll read a few more chapters soon and I'll get back to you.
keep up the great writing, I really like this story
| Andrew Fisher15 chapter 4 . 5/19/2007
Vader... haha. Nice that you didn't verbatim the conversation to the game.
| Andrew Fisher15 chapter 3 . 5/19/2007
| CrystalMoonlightII chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
just read your poening chapter gonna carry on reading and see what its like
| forensicgirl21 chapter 19 . 1/29/2007
Damn this is the best RE fic I have ever read.