Reviews for Keitaro: The Hater Of Women
Y-PenDraig chapter 23 . 9/18/2015
I have to say this was an incredible story, at first I thought it moved a little slow but after a few chapters I felt you actually did really well in covering a lot of background to the story thus added much depth that is difficult to achieve on itself. Thus,after just a few chapters I found myself extremely hooked on it and spend over a day reading it.

its really a shame that you decided to drop it especially in one of my most favorite arcs in 'burn up blades,' Having said that I do agree if your heart is not in it and your try to half heart idly write the next chapter it would probably damage the high standards you have kept throughout the rest of the story and its attention to detail.

Hopefully you'll come back to it in the future, but if you don't it would be better to leave on a high than a sour one.
If you do pick it up again, please let me know?
Hatred chapter 23 . 12/31/2014
I was actually pissed of that this story was going so slow. Considering that it isn't completed and the last update, I knew it wouldn't have been done. It's quite sad, really Oh well... but seriously each chapter was moving too fucking slow for my liking.
Tangled and Twisted chapter 23 . 10/8/2014
Hi could I please get the outline of the remaining chapters please :) thnx tangled&twisted97
swartzvald chapter 23 . 7/8/2014
Well shit. That's disapointing.
SoaringEagle13 chapter 23 . 5/9/2014
That's a shame. I was really hoping for more. That's another dead fic to add to my list.
Yinko chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Wow, bitch sounds like my mother. You know how things that strike too close to home make people uncomfortable? Yeash.
Maxmanatarms chapter 23 . 4/10/2014
After spending my time reading more then half into this i noticed the final chapter and figured id take a peek and found a "I quit" post. So Avoid the story folks guy quit and its a waste with no ending.
Hoganfan chapter 23 . 4/8/2014
Just a quick note to tell you how much I enjoyed your story and to encourage you to finish this. i would love to know how this ends.
GrumpyGrue chapter 22 . 3/20/2014
No shortage of psychosis in Love Hina. Especially in the Aoyama family. It's about time Keitaro cuts his hoes!
GrumpyGrue chapter 20 . 3/20/2014
Humbug. I don't see how Haruka restoring the damaged parts of Hinata Inn could stop Keitaro from exacting justice on Tsuruko. Delay him, sure. But he hasn't yet contemplated that there are other means of retribution besides appealing to law enforcers.

What about noise complaints? Isn't Hinata Inn located near a town? Surely some cops must've investigated the distinct sound of explosions that late at night...when the red moon was noticed by one of the tenants. :(
GrumpyGrue chapter 19 . 3/20/2014
Tsuruko has proven to be little more than a petty, inconsiderate, and spiteful hypocrite. I hope deluded is added, and that Keitaro will show her she can't get away with pulling people's strings in that manner, in modern Japanese society, under his property, to back at her sister.

Tsu's so called "lesson" was nebulous. If she had just told Motoko that she knew all along, and got Keitaro to confirm it, while expressing her disappointment and rationale, things would have gone far more smoothly.

The only thing she did, was heap more wrongs, on top of Motoko's. Sure, painful memories do make for some useful reminders, but how does she maintain such arrogance, after using means that put the others at risk, and with such blatant disregard for personal liberties and property? Everyone else there was at risk due to their petty sibling spat.

If this was supposed to make a point, she only taught her sister to fear her, and life itself. It wastes everybody's time. Humiliating Motoko in physical combat, while asking if she liked Keitaro, is despicable. What a perverse woman-child.
GrumpyGrue chapter 18 . 3/20/2014
I didn't like this chapter. Keitaro doesn't live up to the story's title "Keitaro: The Hater of Women." Character growth? Pshaw. This is a sudden, and ridiculous insult/inconvenience to Keitaro. He's being a tool. Fuggin extreme change in characterization.

Keitaro may have sympathized with Motoko, but at least he faced his challenges without such perversion. Motoko has violated him. Keitaro should have just told Motoko that his life was not her business, when she asked about Kanako. Now, she strongly suspects that Kanako could be used as leverage. Motoko deserves far less than what he is giving her.

If it's explained away by "they're overly-emotional, and haven't thought logically during this chapter," Son, I am disappoint.

Despite Tsuroko being Hayate's wife, a hater of women like him should show her to not mess with him. She treats this like a game, and uses him as a tool to mess with her sister. If Keitaro could shake off Mitsune's appeal, then why is it that Tsuroko enraptured him? Was it the adrenaline? Or the inability to get a boner due to his blood loss? Bleh.

Keitaro has absolutely nothing to gain from this. This is strictly against his creed, which has only been mildly toned down by his study-buddies.
evacat13 chapter 22 . 10/7/2013
Do you still happen to have the outline for this fic? I just read it all again and forgot that this story was on permanent hiatus. I can wait a week.
Madame Mayor chapter 23 . 5/7/2013
Officer Hot-Pants chapter 20 . 4/3/2013
Wow. A real shame this was dropped. Oh well; what we *do* have is pretty damn good.
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