Reviews for Unsolved Riddle
mcc1089 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
This is an amazing work of art. I love your sentence structure and imagery. You capture the reader quickly and you don't let go. I wish you would write more on this, but you left it at a naturally closing point so I can't complain! Wonderful job!
WordsLikeStardust chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
This was incredibly short, sweet and sexy. I loved it. You write Kitty very well, Piotr too. Nice work :D
JC Roberts chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Wow. This is phenomenally well written.
brainfear chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Hot scene back there. Damn! You gotta write more Kitty/Piotr fics
breaktherules chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
This was a great story. I love your Kitty stories in general because I just think you write her so well. Hope you will keep on sumbiting more Xmen stories because I will keep reading!
Dark-bat chapter 1 . 8/7/2005

This is a wonderful story. I really like how you didn't go much too much into details. That usually ruins some sort of mood. (Albeit, some people can pull of near-pornographic stories, but most don't.)

I really do like this. I like it how they rushed into things, and just being NEAR each other made them plunge headlong into a night of passion. I've had moments like that, so I can sympathize. Heh heh.

Wonderful story!
Anhayla chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Wow. That was incredibly hot and wonderfully written. The tension is palpable between these two and you do a masterful job drawing them together. *fans self*
Amokitty chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
This story was unique - definitely different from the usual Kitty/Wisdom pairing, and I enjoyed it a lot. I only wish we knew what was going on in Piotr's mind like we did Kitty's. I would have liked to have seen both sides of the story.

I realize that normally, you don't favor Kitty and Peter as a couple, but despite that you wrote them believably, underlining all the emotion between them with just a minimalistic use of sentiment.

The overall tone is tense and moody, and the sensuality is edgy, raw, and dark. Rarely does Kitty and Piotr get shown this way, and it made for a more suspenseful, interesting story.

Personally I love this pairing, and was glad you tried something different. I wish we could see this story expanded in some way, yet it was also perfect just as it was. Thanks.