|Reviews for First Kiss|
| TheMistOfThePast chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
aawwww! that was so cute! utterly adorable
| LyraMusica chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Aww, that was so cute! You did well writing the emotions and Winry's character! Great job!
| Auto-Alchemechanicist chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Ah! So cute! And so in character! Edward, you're such a shy boy! And Winry, you sneaky bitch. :D I love it. And it's very appreciated you did a mangaverse. I love it when these types of stories are inserted! Awzum job!
| Sayuri chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
This seriously is the best EdWin fic what I have ever read D8 and i've read A LOT of them. I love it, even this fic is alredy 5 years old *3* keep writing x3
| TomatoLove chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
This is the cutest EdWin I've ever read so far! Surprisingly, they were IC in the story, which made the fic even better... :)
| Jiyoung chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
| xxFraise chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
If it weren't for the total abuse of ellipses, and the under use of commas, I would definitely make this the best EdXWinry story I have ever read.
Still, I'd put it at...number two? Ah, who am I kidding, it really is probably the best, being able to mix so many scenes and emotions into it.
Still, you should check this for grammar mistakes a bit harder.
| skywalkerchick1138 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Aww...fluff! Hair wars, funny!
Anyhoo, great story!
| katie chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
so adorably cute! Their personalities were very close to perfect (if not perfect) as well!
| PleiadesWolfe chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
Ah! That was sweet. I wasn't expecting to cry as much as I did.
| JMeans chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
That was cute!
| Shakugan no Shana chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Wow this fic is so cute i loved it. *sqeals* kawaii _
| Lord Rasler chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
- that was great!
| a lovely idiot chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
That was acorale and cute! Not very angsty in my opinion. ut still great!
| ChildO'God chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
lol , i wuv this one fic