Reviews for Goodbye Forever
DarkestxKorner chapter 2 . 7/11/2006
That story was sad!It was very good, though. I suggest that you use a little more commas.
Shannon chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
You need to use paragraphs. I couldn't read it because there was only 3 paragraphs for something that should have been 6 or 7. You need to start a new paragraph every 3 to 4 sentences.

Sorry, do that and I might be able to read it!
Isadora Q. Aiken chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Aww...that was really really good. So sad though. I loved it. I can't wait for a sequel.

iluvkb chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
will-herm-simetra chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
Great Story!Please hurry up w/ the sequel. I thought there was going to be suicide...and yeah, I'd like to read ur HP stories too.
nicoli-boli chapter 1 . 6/19/2005 sad! For a while I was thinking she would kill herself.

Can't wait for the sequal!
Slippery Dip chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Good Story I cannot wait for the sequel!

Meghan chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Ah. that was so sad! I 'm kinda happy you had that angle though. everyone else has Klaus hating Fiona . good job!
Elphie Marky chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
That was sad. I thought Isadora was going to kill herself. Good story though.