|Reviews for Can We Keep Her?|
| StixOfCinnamon chapter 9 . 8/10/2012
| ArtemisApollo97 chapter 9 . 3/28/2012
i aint sure whether or not to call Mike a hopeless romantic or just desperate but its brilliant i love it :)
| ArtemisApollo97 chapter 6 . 3/28/2012
nuke in the bathroom- brilliant!
drunken bums- :D lol
nuns- ? the answer was on... TV? shame my homework aint on TV
| ArtemisApollo97 chapter 3 . 3/26/2012
first of all- grape juice and cabbage pizza? erm... ok then. and i love Don's sarcasm at the end of chap 3- priceless
| Sassyblondexoxo chapter 8 . 5/22/2006
LOL Kaya, I can just imagine your muses dragging you down the street... and I'm glad that they are, because I'm still enjoying it.
I love your Mikey. You're able to make him the comic genius that he really is..."Ninjaing?" And Raph dragging him out of the room...hilarious!
Keep em coming! ~SASSY
| Anyuna chapter 7 . 5/21/2006
Hey dudette, just leaving a review so's that I can put this on the ol' favorites list.
Love, peace and chicken grease
| Anyuna chapter 8 . 5/21/2006
I just found this story, and read all the way to this point. It's quite slow moving, but compelling enough to make one keep on reading. I'm really enjoying it so far, and am looking forward to see where this is gonna go.
Love, peace and chicken grease
| Chibi Rose Angel chapter 8 . 5/18/2006
This chapter was by far the funniest one yet! I just KNEW that their differences weren't going to be resolved that quickly. No way in shell are Leo and Raph ever going to be all happy, lovey dovey and sappy brothers. I know they love each other but they don't go out of their way to share or express that love. Anyways, poor Donnie. First his dream about the pool was interrupted and then he has to tell Don about the rescue. Although this is just me being a bit dirty, I thought he was having a wet dream. Yeah I know that's pretty kinky but I seriously thought that's what was going on until you revealed he just wanted to go for a swin in the water. Loved how Mike spit his cereal out when he heard Splinter's voice too. And I loved how Raph just dragged Mikey away. There's no telling what Raph's going to do to my poor Mikey. Anywho, great job so update soon please! _
| engelina chapter 8 . 5/17/2006
okay first: good story!
i finally managed to find time and read the story so far...
i hope samantha will be okay...and donnie has to tell splinter...wonder if splinter will find out the whole story...
and i loved the news report...
a i liked so mutch of ths story its to mutch to sum up here...
hope you find time to update soon...because i can hardly wait for the next chapter..
| techgeekster chapter 8 . 5/16/2006
Great Chapter! Please hurry really fast with the next one! KK!
| Jhessill chapter 8 . 5/16/2006
I'm enjoying what I'm reading. Looking forward to the next update. Keep up the good work. :)
I feel for poor Donnie.
| Jessiy Landroz chapter 8 . 5/16/2006
I'm glad to see that this story is still standing! XD we really need to know what happened to that brooklyn girl, and from what I can tell, Mike had fallen for her, hard! but I'm a bit curiouse about the dream scene Donny had at first, hmm... could it be? does or did he feel something for her too, but didn't realize it yet?
and leaving her where she could be taken care of- who said that if they're the ones who left her there, ARE the ones who hurt her? if they were the ones to hurt her, then they wouldnt have left her there!
when she wakes up, I wonder if she'd at least recall hearing their voices or anything... I wonder...
| Nothingtoseehere123456789 chapter 8 . 5/16/2006
Hehe poor Don, indeed why is it always him :-D
Great chapter, loved Mikey's reaction with the news report.
Although I'm still a little lost on why Mikey was waking Donny up there, maybe I need to read the chapter better, ah well doesn't matter.
Good work :-D
| StarWindDancer chapter 7 . 4/2/2006
Oh my gosh, this is too funny. I just love hyperactive Mikey driving Donnie nuts. And I loved how they wanted to keep Samantha as a pet. The brother's banter was neat. The whole situation quite funny and cool. thanks for sharing this wonderful story.
| Chibi Rose Angel chapter 7 . 2/3/2006
My poor goofball. Not only is he the one who gets picked on the most but well he would be the one who happens to be a bit on the portly side. *sighs* Wonder if I could whip him into better shape? Anywho, I love the way you write Don and Mikey's banter. It's so believable and downright funny. I think one of the best parts of this chapter was, "No but I see an out of shape ninja." Anywho, update soon please! _