I haven't seen this show in years, and obviously this fic is years old too. But wanted to say, you captured River perfectly. The rhythm of speech. The words that make sense if you pay attention. I loved it.

Read this years ago and came back for a re-read. This is so awesome. Thanks for sharing. I hope inspiration strikes again someday. -

Just re-reading... still my top favorite river and jayne story!... hoping for an update one day...

14 chapters, like in the show.

I like to read unfinished stories, there is some mystery in them. You can only imagine how it would end.

A great story indeed.

Where is the end of this story? I have to know. Arghhhhh

No, no, no, nooooo. This was so good! *cries* Oh we were right at the peak when everything culminates! Oh this is so good I'm so sad!

Wish this was finished.

SPECTACURLY AWESOME
PRETTY PREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTY
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE
UPDATE SOON

nooooo! flip man, I knew I shouldn't have reread this again. I'm going through my followed stories and I'll have to keep this one on followed. wish there was more.

SPECTACULAR
PRETTY PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE
UPDATE SOON

Loving this and looking forward to more!

Hands down the best Rayne fic I've ever read. I was disappointed there was no more and updates have stopped for close to a decade. I understand RL was unkind to you in your updates in 2011-2012. Any chances you'll make a miraculous comeback?

I really hope you manage to finish this one day, I love your writing :)

Ahhh! This is fantastic! I started reading before I realized it was incomplete...I lie the AU you have constructed and hope you will continue it, thanks so much for sharing this ️

Please, please, please finish this...
It is one of the best Rayne fics I have ever read.
It must be finished.