Reviews for Anomaly
livinoutloud chapter 9 . 4/10/2006
good
LiMiYa chapter 9 . 4/9/2006
Your story has me at the edge of my seat. Update soon!
ChelseasDeadSmile chapter 9 . 3/19/2006
Hey I love it,You change pov's when ever is needed and I understand it perfectly
Long lost sorrow chapter 9 . 3/15/2006
This is a really good story...Thanks for writing it! Update soon, please!
E. L. Lockhart chapter 9 . 3/14/2006
Huzzah, another update! Please continue, this is excellent stuff!
bluezenith chapter 8 . 3/13/2006
oh, more. I'm into this now. :-)
E. L. Lockhart chapter 8 . 3/10/2006
Yay, you updated! *Happy dance* Now update again! Please? This is great!
Gwen Luthael chapter 8 . 3/7/2006
more cliffhangers? oh well... i'll have to content myself with other stories... *mopes* i hope you can find time in your busy life to write more soon!
Gwen Luthael chapter 7 . 3/6/2006
you cant stop there! update, you evil author! wow... this is great, especially if this is your first matrix fanfic! btw, i dunno if this was intentional, but the line "In front of her, she could see the backs of the other pupils’ heads. Blonde, brunette, redhead." is cypher's line from the matrix... i like the poem she wrote. Locke forbid niobe from seeing the oracle? wow... forbidding niobe to do something probably isn't the smartest thing to do

well, i hope you update soon!

-gwen
This.Second.Smile chapter 7 . 1/27/2006
Hey Mon amie... I think this is cool even tho I don't have a clue about the Matrix! I'm liking it...speshly the descriptions of Trinity (apart from Morpheus she's the only character I know!) Anyway with the whole I'll show you mine if you show me yours... my story is on the way and I don't intend to give you anymore clues than you gave me! X
Nick chapter 7 . 1/10/2006
I'm really enjoying this story and would be very grateful if you continued to update.

I'll be very interested to see how you write fight scenes (with Niobe involved, is avoidance a possibility? :D).

The story reads well, but slightly thinly in places. If I were to suggestr a change, I would ask for richer settingand character descriptions.

And thanks!
E.L. Lockhart chapter 7 . 1/5/2006
I really love this story! Please keep updating! *Puppy-dog eyes* It's so well written!
Echo chapter 6 . 11/10/2005
Wait...no more? NO! very cool story and excellent writing. update soon
Dynx chapter 5 . 10/21/2005
Dude.

Just discovered this story, it's so much better than any of the other Matrix ones. You HAVE to continue, now you've got me hooked.
LiMiYa chapter 5 . 9/24/2005
Hmm, the legend that Morpheus recited sounds very interesting. Really liked how the Neb's captain is portrayed, you caught him perfectly.
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