Reviews for Anomaly |
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![]() ![]() i just read all 5 chapters and i gotta say... WOW! This is awesome dude. Keep those updates comin'! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey i'm reading too. very good story by the way |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It wasn't that slow...you just had to explain a lot. Anyways I can't wait for more in the many chapters to you later Lyndsay |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is great! I've never tried writing a Matrix fanfic myself, but while I was reading it, I never felt that Trinity or Morpheus or anyone seemed out of character at all. Please update soon - this story really captured my interest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A quiet, reflective chapter. (Like a pause before the storm.) Just what was going on with Ana anyway? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the banter between Switch and Trinity. You also caught Morpheus perfectly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEA! Another GREAT chapter! Plz keep going. Lyndsay |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh that was interesting! finally i found i story i like! lol. this is going somewhere! i reely rely love it. u captured trinity's character perfectly, explained her logic which is great! im so bad for trying to keep characters IN character so well done on that! Morpheus was also portrayed perfectly! oh ur just so fabby! lol. yeah i wonder who this girl is and what shes gonna do to find the one. ok so PLEASE update soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it alot.I can't wait for another Luck. Peace Love and Hapiness Lyndsay |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start, you caught my interest. Continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, yes I do think you should continue! This is the first piece of your work I've read as I know nothing about Harry Potter, but I really love the way you write, especially the attention to detail. It's clear from your notes you want to improve your writing but I don't think there's much work to be done, lol! Looking forward to updates ) Sirocco xx |