|Reviews for Unknowns|
| charlotte chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
okay, it was an alright story at least the idea was. you should have made more drama about sirius being totured and more description of what him and james talked about. also it was confusing about him and remus;clairfy more!. next, the main thing that bothered me and made it hard to follow was that there was no speech marks for when people were talking.
| Audrey G. Black chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Loved it! write more *grin*
| angelofplottwists chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
It is so very pretty...Squee!
| siriusly delusional chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
let me say, i liked this alot! it had great style and i've never read anything quite like ti before. one thing, though, that i have to critize, is that sirius' parents, though manic purebloods, were said by sirius not to have been deatheaters in the fifth book. the only member of his family who was a deatheater was regulus. other than that inconsistantcy, it was a wonderful story and i hope i'm not coming accross as snotty, i just really, really like big words like 'superfluously' lol! _'
| Jasmine Starlight chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
waa...maa maa...very fuzzley and such...and whatnot...but keep it up...im glad i went online to upload my new one-shots else i wouldnt have read your three fics till tomorrow and they are really good and shouldnt have to wait..
| Vampyre Neko chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
He felt that all that was left was for James to admit he was actually a vampire and Peter to say he was a transsexual house elf and then they'd be all set
hahaha! more soon please!