|Reviews for Unsealed Fate|
| theblondeone07 chapter 26 . 1/28/2006
another great story! It is sad that aria and cathan had to die though :( It was a good idea to have the babies be named after them! Kepp up the great work with these stories!
| Taeniaea chapter 26 . 9/30/2005
I Love The Story!
| Ghostwriter chapter 26 . 9/23/2005
This is cute. Aria and Cathan's legacy lives on. Rockin'. Catch ya on the flip side.
| jenny chapter 26 . 8/25/2005
yeah, MAYBE someone else can guess the story. *snort* ... just kidding! just kidding! you guys are ALL great psychics! REALLY!
ok... here's where i talk sad... cause the story's over... god, i REALLY started to LOVE this story. i mean, you only connect to a story as fabulous, tragic, and romantic as this... about 20 times in your life? whatever. but how often can you do that on the INTERNET! ... that's what i thought.
so anyway, i'm talking with marieke on AIM, and i started ranting on and on about how i'm going to miss this story and stuff... and then i had an idea; you could publish this story, y'know?
i mean, yeah, some characters belong to Saban, but most of them are your's. and you couldn't really publish anything else, but this one has about four people who are owned by Saban. there are a LOT of other characters and they are ALL owned by YOU! :) the power of light isn't even saban's! they're like my light warriors - a seperate group completely. so all you have to really do is tweak this story to completely erase any trace of power rangers, make it more understandable without having to read Twist of Fate (since you can't publish that, obviously :'( ), slightly change andros's, zhane's, and karone's name (but keep ashley, that isn't owned by saban!), and lengthen and elaborate it to make it a full sized thing! yay! we have a story! ... so... you really could do it, y'know? us reviewers, we could be like your editor's-before-the-editor, y'know? don't know what that is, but we could be! :D
yeah, anyway, i choose option 2, cause that way less people (not inlcuding me, of course :P) can guess what the story will be like... okay, no, that's selfish. but i choose option 2 anyway, cause i like your sad, tragic stories. although, i think this one was of the best. even exceeding twist of fate or mirror mirror. seriously. it was... so tragic, yet so wonderfully good. yeah...
anyway... i'm still REALLY sad that this story is over... even though it was great, i'm still sad. it's sad that it's over... :'(
well... update soon! ... even though you don't really have a story to update, update soon anyway! :)
| the-power-of-love chapter 26 . 8/25/2005
aw loved it
| DizneeDol chapter 26 . 8/25/2005
Aw, this was such a sweet chapter.
I LOVED the story it was awsome! :)
Write both of them next, lol. I can't pick one.
| juzblue chapter 26 . 8/25/2005
aria and cathan huh? almost made me cry. anyway, great ending! as for the next story, as long as you don't kill anyone non-evil, both will do fine. but i sorta prefer something with battles and stuff, ya know? hehe.
| HopelessRomantic45 chapter 26 . 8/25/2005
i really don't know, they both sound good. but being a hopeless romantic, i think i'm going to go with option 1! sad that this is over, but its a good ending, can't wait to see more from you!
| Ashley Hammond Astro Yellow chapter 26 . 8/25/2005
Okay, now that's settled;
IT'S OVER! :( YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO US! THIS IS TOO GOOD TO BE OVER!
Now I can't say update soon anymore.
*cries some more*
Well, I did love the story... It's really sad it's over, but hey Andros and Ashley got 4 kids. :-P That's something I can live with.
| the-power-of-love chapter 25 . 8/23/2005
read 22-25 like was sad but good update asap plz
| jenny chapter 25 . 8/23/2005
YES! I WAS THE ONE WHO SAID THAT ZHANE WOULD CRY SOMEWHERE IN THIS STORY! I ACTUALLY DID WRITE THAT! *slumps over* i can't believe i actually predicted that aria would die.
... you know, right now i'm reading over my old reviews for this story... and i actually did predict a lot of stuff correctly. like, in my first review for this story, i said stuff about the dreams being the future. well, i was right, in a way. maybe not the CORRECT or FUTUREfuture, but in the future, just plain old future.
and my little confusion and rant about the conversation between andros and that person was somewhat correct... am i psychic!
ok, on to the second chapter!
hmm... in the second chapter review i didn't say much - i did do a little speculation about aria from the future and stuff. but just that - just that...
*sigh* in the third chapter review i made that fateful guess that aria would die... *pouts* WHY DID I HAVE TO MAKE THAT GUESS!
*sigh* i guess we should keep going...
yeah, i kept saying that aria would die... and i didn't say much of any other predicty stuff in that review, so we move on now...
... y'know, this is going to take a LONG time if i keep going through every review i wrote... who cares?
oh, and in here i said that cathan was in love with aria... who's good, who's good, who's good... right... so... wow, i wrote a long review. i really ranted about SPD...
uh... i said that enni was weak and stupid? although that wasn't very predicty, was it? ... no, it wasn't. yeah. i talked a little about the villians, but that's just about all that was relevant to the story. so yeah.
m... i renewed my thought that aria would die (again... gr...) and... i also said that karone would get pregnant. i think that was right, somwhere in here, right? too lazy to comb through every chapter.
okay, here's where i listed all my real preictions so far... and figures, they all came true. cathan is in love with aria, check. aria's going to die, check. (*sob, sniff*) andros's dreams are somewhat real, check. and zhane is going to cry, check. :P oh yeah, and i also said that ashley was pregnant - that was right too. :P hah.
uh... i really didn't do much in here... can't believe i almost died... :( i don't wanna die... but oh yeah, here's where i put you on that smilie obbsession! :D
ah, the fabulous introduction of my SUBCONCIOUS, which has 'graced' many reviews over the course of Unsealed Fate and Just The Beginning. hmm... in this whole review, i actually managed to not say anything at all relevant to the story. wow. cool.
this is where you all aquire bumps on the head thanks to me. yay! well, actually, i did predict wrongly here... i think. i said that they would go back to earth... and they didn't... oh well, i still got more stuff right! :)
uh... here was one line stuff... it was weird... ok then, let's move on...
well, i met with zhane's subconcious here, does that count? ... yes... no...? well, that was pretty much it.
nothing sane in here. i'm going to ignore it...
i did some predicty stuff about the team's reactions to ashley's pregnancy. unfortunetly, i wasn't that right... darn. but i still liked it!
okay, i'm going to stop there today... i can finish responding to my review in my next review, and have a built-in scrolly, movey, thingy! :)
this thing actually isn't THAT long, but it's still pretty long, though, if you ask me. i like it! :)
| HopelessRomantic45 chapter 25 . 8/23/2005
i luv this story, plz keep going!
| Ashley Hammond Astro Yellow chapter 25 . 8/23/2005
Ow, ow, ow, it's cute! Too bad Aria is dead, maybe you can arrange a funeral in your backyard and visit her grave everyday. Put fresh flowers on it for me every single day you visit!
Loved the chapter. Update soon.
| juzblue chapter 25 . 8/22/2005
i still can't believe she really died. *sniff* (and the fact that you're not bringing her back *glares*) but i know, i know. it wouldn't be the same anyways. oh well. is this the last chapter?
| jenny chapter 24 . 8/21/2005
i hate you.
on the other hand, i can't hate you.
i was right.
right now, i seriously wish i wasn't.
and cathan died too.
they were bonded.
i hate being able to guess your stories right now.
i think i was the only one who predicted correctly.
why, oh why, did i?
really wish it wasn't true.
this had to happen, didn't it?
someone had to die.
ARIA had to die.
and so did cathan, in the end.
both of them.
leaving behind the others.
aria saved ashley.
such a scary thing.
but you can't avoid it.
ashley wasn't supposed to die.
but she did.
aria was supposed to die, wasn't she.
but she didn't.
this time around, it was right.
but it shouldn't have been...
I TOTALLY KNEW THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPEN!
except for the cathan dying thing.
that wasn't predicted...
but maybe it was.
somewhere in the back of my head,
i might have known.
i thought cathan and aria were... BONDED, somehow.
and i knew aria would die.
so i think, somewhere in my concious, cathan died as well.
an ironic twist on the cassie/phantom ship.
i'm such a hypocrite.
i DO feel a little happy that aria died,
because i was right.
but i also feel sad,
cause i really grew to love that character.
as much as i liked cassie,
i liked aria as well.
she grew on me the best of all the new characters...
and i really loved this story; correction: love.