Reviews for In Peril
MelanisticLeopard chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Lol... I love the slow way you reveal what's going on. It's an extreme way to 'show, don't tell'-leaving us guessing. But I love it. I love all your fics-the dialogue is what makes it..

LMFAO! I didn't even notice any UST!

LOL, Naruto would be slowing everyone down. It's just his lot in life!

Very, very funny ficlet! You have a great grasp of the characters.
The Dark Knight's Revenge chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Hahaha, that was great :D :D
GSYH chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
/Sasuke had already lost his shirt by then and had to go topless until he could buy one in the next town./

Katseng chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
Every time I run into this story it makes me smile really loudly.

Novocain chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Huh. ...That's weird. You may want to check out a story called "Salvo" - it's got the exact same opening line as this, and it was posted after your story.

Anyway, excellent work. Very humorous - I liked the dialogue. -
pisquenta chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
LMFAO! Boys will be boys, even if they are denying their obvious UST!
SalemProphet chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
boys being boys, LOL. lurve it!
Animeaddict666 chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
"Hate you," Sasuke gasped.

That was the funniest thing I've read in 4 eva! I love you for that.
Ms Trick chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
AHAHAHA! Fantastic! I love these drabbles. The little bites of humou r and really wonderful. ;)
Gohanzgirl chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
I love the way you write Sasuke! Wonderful wonderful writing!
AubreyWitch chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Funny :D Wish it was longer. But I understand. ;) Still cute enough to merit a review.
lilykt7 chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
“This is how meaninglessly our lives will end. Because you can’t move your ass faster down the fucking rope.”

best line, EVER.

This story is so funny yet so simple, it's refreashing to read.
Blonde-Existentialist chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Ah so typical of the team. Just normal kids in an um...normal situation...except well not.
openwindow2 chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
AHAHAH! at least they act like kids...XD
alescA chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
::cheers for Sakura:: Nifty fic.
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