|Reviews for Spiral Out|
| XxLilyNGxX chapter 9 . 7/5/2006
holy...wow that was...I can't...words.
I am speachless.
This story is awesome, one of the few naruto fics on this site I actually like.
Sonmei is also very believable and likeable.
One thing that does bother me is that Temari doesn't seem like the type to go insane and cause a war. But w/e it works.
Definately adding this to my alert list.
| Lifestyle chapter 9 . 7/2/2006
well...darn it. Now I'm out of chapters. I guess I'll have to wait just like everyone else.
...um...don't take too long, alright?
| Lifestyle chapter 4 . 7/2/2006
“He does this for their own good, he says, because he of all people knows that friends and family cause nothing but pain.”
…only you can make me want to hug Sasuke…*sigh*
Please, by all means, ignore that.
Yes, and once again, you’ve managed to make me feel incompetent as a writer. Way to go. Have a prize. Or a muffin. That sounds better.
Ha- I’m just kidding of course. Well done. Plus- I’m out of muffins.
Actually, that’s a lie, but let’s pretend it isn’t.
“I'm a pretentious ass.”
| Lifestyle chapter 3 . 7/2/2006
"There was an Akatsuki member there?"
Kakashi paused. Then he said, "My former student."
Should have seen that coming. ok, maybe not.
But is seems like things are getting heated!
...wait...and what happened to Naruto?
guess I'll just have to wait and find out, now won't I?
Good work. Once again. I'm really repeating myself here, aren't I?
so, yeah, Keep it up, and all that good stuff.
| Lifestyle chapter 2 . 7/2/2006
Ah: and there's nothing like a good fic to plant your teeth in!
This is an amazing story. Everything's well written, defiantly something you should be proud of.
I'm loving this more and more the further I get into it.
Ha. and he is a Sharingan child. Now, father options. There's Sasuke, (who sounds dead, but could have been alive back then), Itatchi, and Kakashi, (but that Sharingan probably wouldn't have been able to get passed down if it was implanted, now was it?
I'm guessing Sasuke. Watch me be wrong.
Gah. Kakashi's freakin' awesome. Great portrayal.
Keep it up. ;)
| Sono Sai chapter 9 . 6/8/2006
sasuke-kun stop being mean(wahha) hee hee hee just kiding. but don't kill sakura-san or sonmei-kun.
| Only Secret chapter 9 . 5/28/2006
awrgh! what kinda butt is sasuke to do dat to his own son...*grumbles* Great chapter though! I once again look forward to your update!
| Lyraelin chapter 9 . 5/25/2006
Awesome. It's finally the introduction of Sonmei and Sasuke - and you pulled it off really interestingly, and beautifully. Loved it!
| eijfhsdkjfhsakjdhf chapter 9 . 5/15/2006
wow... just... wow.
This is the best I've read in a long time. So many mysteries and unknowns. So dark and yet so maddingly humorous. Especially Sasuke. I think he's funny in a morbid, self-denying and insane way. The way you depict him it's as if he's doing everything he can to go back to the way things were, but he has this... involuntary obligation towards some pseudo-part of himself that makes him go against everything that he believes. Completley and utterly insane. And funny.
Or at least amusing.
It's cool the way you keep hinting at stuff and keep me in suspence, even though I know /exactly/ what's going to happen. The whole story is just confirming my suspicions. Most of the time. There are suprises, too. Right now I'm fumbling in the dark, though. I dunno where you're goin' with this, but I'm pretty convinced that it's gonna be cool.
And even though I think there are a little too many people suffering from insanity, people are reacting a little too badly to the death of loved ones and even though the whole thing is a wee bit on the overly melodramatic side...
...I still give it two fruitcakes, three double-chocolate-chip-cookies, one cup of coffee and a stuffed pinguin with an unhealthy facination for small silvery screws.
And that's /VERY/ good in my book. Especially the double-chocolate-chip-cookies.
Keep it comin'!
| Demeter1 chapter 9 . 5/14/2006
Holy shit. Forgive the profanity, but I just made my way through this story and it was fantastic. It was slow and quick, and it never let up. I loved how the pieces fell together and made this jagged whole and it was just absolutely wonderful. ) Can't wait to see the last few chapters as this fic finishes!
| indigochipmunk chapter 9 . 5/14/2006
Wow...that is all I can say. This fic so far is amazing. Its so in character, that I could actually see some of the things that were happening. Definately not the fluffy "I love you, you love me" thing, and I love that. Hope to see the next chapter out soon. _
| AccountShouldBeDeleted chapter 9 . 5/14/2006
| Pontificator chapter 9 . 5/14/2006
I cannot express how excited I was when I saw that Spiral Out had been updated. XD I loved the dialogue - it is at once both direct and subtle; it carries the story and examines the motives and emotions of the characters. The meeting in the caves was perfect.
| A. Lee chapter 9 . 5/12/2006
There is just enough angst to make me happy and not enough angst to irritate me (and by the way, I love that the angst doesn't result from the characters' stupidity, but is rather situational angst), and the plotline makes me happy and that all of the pairings happen to be, more or less, ones I like (such as Shikamaru-Temari, and Hinata-Naruto) just makes me love this fanfic more nad more. I was so confused at first, but the way everything slowly fell into place (it helped a lot when I figured out which Hokage the Godaime was - I had to count carefully, and list them all in my head to make sure I wasn't confusing myself) was so very lovely. Anyways, I can't wait to read the next installment.
| ShortySC22 chapter 9 . 5/12/2006
Oh wow, what a chapter! I love this story and I love where you take it. Sonmei is a great character.