| Reviews for A Journey of Discovery Book One: Pendulum |
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   Dasgun chapter 1 . 11/28/2022 ..-. |
| Majestic-MSFC chapter 1 . 8/28/2022 Love this story, it’s always fun to read. Great work this trilogy is one of my favourites |
| gabby chapter 1 . 5/26/2020 I read this for the first time on (I believe) the jedi council forums about a million years ago. And they're still wonderful. So glad I remembered this and ran into it again. |
| LoveGlutton chapter 1 . 7/20/2018 Well it’s good that he recognized it early on... this outta be good |
| Gehatik chapter 13 . 1/12/2017 Wow. I have yet to see the Dynamic between Luke and Mara, especially in a pre-VOTF fic, done so well. |
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 11/6/2016 X-D for Luke and twins! |
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 11/6/2016 Good part where Luke refuses to overuse the Force, something he forgot in the books Really liked the conversation with Vader, preferable over Episode III |
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 11/5/2016 Interesting perspective on Padme for Vader. Usually he still pines for her, but you show him here as one who has rejected that part of his life :-) Necessary part where being with Palpatine breaks down the doubts Mara was developing after being in the cell. However briefly LOL for Han addressing the issue of the droids flying his ship before Good detail where Luke points out that her training was carefully directed by Palpatine, and thus limited. Also appreciated the elaboration on Yoda's infamous line |
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 11/5/2016 Good work here on Mara's POV, and also sound reasoning for why Luke figures out the deception |
| Darksnider05 chapter 10 . 1/10/2016 Would of been cool if they had given in and done it down in the dirt and enjoyed what happiness they could have even down there. With just each other to get by. Probably would of been a good chance for some character growth. |
| starcrosser163 chapter 5 . 12/24/2015 OMG! SOSOSOSOSOOOOOO GOOD! CANNOT W8 2 KEEP READING! |
| Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 13 . 7/17/2014 A lovely story well worth the read. I love ALL of your stories. You are a most accomplished writer, and I always enjoy the adventures you take us readers on. I hope you keep writing, because I cannot wait to see what you come up with next. |
| Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 12 . 7/17/2014 "I want a souvenir!" LOL, I love that! And Luke telling Mara she was still in charge! Love it! |
| Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 8 . 7/17/2014 I am thoroughly enjoying this, I must say. I love the banter between Mara and Luke. Can't wait to continue. :) |
| jedilittlebee chapter 13 . 1/25/2014 I love the last couple of sentences. Ties the title of the stories and theme together perfectly. You have a remarkable talent with words! |