| Reviews for A Journey of Discovery Book One: Pendulum |
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   Lady Elora chapter 13 . 8/3/2005 Good God...that was wonderful. I'm speechless. You have a real talent for writing Luke/Mara Fanfiction. BRAVO! I LOVE IT! Onward to Book 2. :) |
| Lady Elora chapter 12 . 8/3/2005 Oh man, this story is chopped full of the funniest quotes! I love: "She's not your type," he added, not able to pass up the chance to rib Lando. "Oh, I don't know ..." the former Baron Administrator drawled, straining his neck for another glimpse. "She's female." And Han giving Luke the cloak and then the thumb's up...man, I've just added you to my favorite author's list! :) |
| Lady Elora chapter 11 . 8/3/2005 I love Han...SO MUCH! Good lord, and I love the exclamations you use in here. :) Sithspit...Stang...they make me laugh. :) Bravo! |
| Lady Elora chapter 8 . 8/3/2005 Ha ha. I love Luke! Him and Mara make such a great couple. :) |
| Lady Elora chapter 7 . 8/1/2005 You update quickly...I like that. Keeps the story flowing better. Onward! :) |
| Lady Elora chapter 6 . 8/1/2005 Good God, I hope they escape soon! |
| Lady Elora chapter 5 . 8/1/2005 This is getting more evil by the minute! I must read on... |
| Lady Elora chapter 4 . 8/1/2005 I love Luke's and Mara's interactions, it's so funny! |
| Lady Elora chapter 3 . 8/1/2005 Wow...that was a bit of a surprise. Whew...go Luke! I love the guys who are full of honor. :) |
| Lady Elora chapter 2 . 8/1/2005 I am truly loving this! BRAVO! |
| Lady Elora chapter 1 . 8/1/2005 I like this twist on RotJ. :) Great job! I'm loving how you describe Mara Jade, I can't wait to read more! GO LUKE! |
| mcbway chapter 13 . 7/17/2005 I hope you're uploading book II soon, because I can't wait any longer |
| DonR chapter 13 . 7/15/2005 A excellent work. Well done. Charactors well drawn and situations flow well into next scenes. Plot and events believable and mesh together. Looking forward to more. Keep it up. |
| AccountDead3445544w22e45 chapter 13 . 7/15/2005 Great Story, I'll keep an eye out for the second book. |
| pip chapter 13 . 7/12/2005 Thanks for such a great story! I can't wait for the next book! |