Reviews for Can't Go Home Again
gaul1 chapter 4 . 1/14/2006
good story, awaits next chapter, byes
Morden Night chapter 4 . 12/24/2005
Another winner by Innortal. God damn I am quite addicted to your writings lately. Well... I suppose I should get some sleep right now. Christmas is in about... 6 hours so thanks again for the read.

Update soon please.
tomdj1701 chapter 4 . 12/5/2005
Nice story Innortal, I hope you update this one soon.
vizeerlord chapter 4 . 11/12/2005
like miniskirt on fat chick; too short!

like miniskirt on Nabiki; need more
vizeerlord chapter 4 . 11/12/2005
like miniskirt on fat chick; too short!

like miniskirt on Nabiki; need more
Hiryo chapter 4 . 11/9/2005
0.0 WOW by all that is holy that will be a fun chapter the next time!
FaytRain chapter 4 . 11/8/2005
blink... blink... blink?

woah... never saw that coming...

the whole Konatsu thingy...

AND the Akari thingy...

AND! the Nodoka thingy...

AND NOW! the Ukyo thingy...

you're really full of surprises aint cha?

HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!

.:evil voice:. I'm watching... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! .:ahem:.

UPDATE SOON!
SakuraAyanami chapter 4 . 11/8/2005
hehehe cool im starting to like this fic n_n
Wonderbee31 chapter 4 . 11/8/2005
Great section here, and looking forward to what happens when all the items of power are gathered, and come into conflict with one another.
Firehedgehog chapter 4 . 11/7/2005
so continue
Silverscale chapter 4 . 11/7/2005
Excellent chapter, keep it up.
Nabeshin Danbei Ayanami chapter 4 . 11/7/2005
BWAHAHAHAHAHA *takes a deep breath* BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA. *Ahem*. Um... well... I find this story..um... very...very... amusing. Well, I also have to say that you're evil that you left the reactions to Ranma and Nabiki and their kids in the next chapter. You are one evil bastard. Guess it keeps the readers. ~Ja, mata ne.
Dumbledork chapter 4 . 11/7/2005
Great chapter.
Drkjester chapter 4 . 11/7/2005
Hey glad to see another chapter, and as alway love the story.
A.Nonymous chapter 4 . 11/7/2005
I've got to agree with most of what SpikeyKun said.

Particularly about the "Ranko" name. I can still remember a horrible Mary-Sue fic where the main MALE character was named "Ryoko." After about a chapter I gave up...but that may just have been the overwhelming Mary-Sueness...Of course, if "Ranko" actually has a curse that he/she/Ranma is controlling Nabiki might have a point.

I'd suggest updating the part where Ranma finds out the woman Nabiki is set on making his mistress is actually his mother and adding a paragraph or two about her being so young. It actually makes more sense for Nabiki to be setting Ranma up with a 24 year old than a 40 year old. Assuming Nodoka got married at the absurd age of 16 like Genma wanted Ranma and Akane to.

Perhaps "Nabiki the pervert" should continue to tease Ranma about his "young" mistress...

As to Shampoo sensing that Ranma had returned though. The series, and all Japanese anime/manga is just full of omens/visions/feelings like that. If you want you could just add something like "the shirt (or something else) Shampoo had kept to remember her first Airen fell off the shelf."
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