|Reviews for Forgiven|
| azarielthebladed chapter 5 . 6/12/2008
this is certainly an interesting take on Raven's empathy.
| The Mad shoe1 chapter 5 . 5/26/2006
Now things are getting interesting, please update soon.
| Simon System chapter 5 . 4/18/2006
Hm, I sorry I have to put a bit of critisim here.
You've done a great job of writing emotions and details, which is a great skill. It shows you did put alot of time into this which is great.
But that fact you've noted there will be major Robin and Starfire bashing eventually in this story makes it hard for me to take the story seriously.
In fanfiction, character bashing is pretty much the most needless thing a writer can do. It's takes away from a stories credibility in my eyes. If your not even going to try and potray characters correctly it will make the story seem silly.
And this story thus far has seemed like a serious drama, including character bashing would very much reduce the quality of your writing I think.
Just a suggestion.
| Bunnysquirrel chapter 5 . 4/13/2006
Good job, now write more! You're good at this!
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 5 . 4/13/2006
Good chapter. Great idea about making BB dialogue with his inner beast.
Keep the good writing.
| Charys of the shadows chapter 5 . 4/13/2006
interesting. update soon.x
| Haven Artemis Roth chapter 5 . 4/12/2006
*blinks* wow, this is gettin' interesting
| IGAF-kun chapter 5 . 4/12/2006
Very nice. _
I say that a lot, don't I?
| Mysterious Boy Wonder Robin chapter 4 . 4/8/2006
Nice why I always say nice bah more like perfect update soon
| Agent of the Divine One chapter 4 . 4/8/2006
I'm sure that such an ability comes with a great deal of baggage. And Beast Boy wants so badly to help her, but it will take time for her to tell him. I just hope that he can finally admit that he loves her.
Post when you can.
| Bunnysquirrel chapter 4 . 4/8/2006
Nice story...blah blah blah...not in the mood for reviewing, but it was good...
| Haven Artemis Roth chapter 4 . 4/8/2006
| Charys of the shadows chapter 4 . 4/8/2006
great chapter. update
| IGAF-kun chapter 2 . 4/7/2006
Nice. _ So far so good.
| StickLad chapter 2 . 4/1/2006
You should have longer chapters. But, it keeps the suspense a bit more. Update soon!