Reviews for Always Waiting No More
lee7 anna chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
i really liked it. nice and creative. i wish you could write more .
WolvesRock14 chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
God I'm crying here. This was really well written and so sad. Betty and Noah at least had a great friendship, but now that friendship is gone. T_T
Abigail Fond chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Wow! I always come back to read this and i still think its the best story evar! Betty kind of deserved that but in a way, it sucks Noah chose Penelope over her! You should make a sequel to that! But keep it about Betty and Noah! And no Sparky! :D No offense but he sucks! :) I give this story's intensity a 5.7 out of 6!
Colouraptor chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
wow, that was really sad. Betty got told. i love it though. Noah and Penelope are cute together but im still a BxN fan. great job though!
cherrichik chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
AH! HOW could YOU! BettyxNoah dammit!
atomicbetty chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
i think this story is the best one i have read i cryed when i read it i think betty should have told Noha a long time and now its to late she has nothing now accpet the glatic gardiens keep up the good work man i look foward to reading some more of you're storys i am adding this one to my fave list keep up the good work
the king of the river chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
i loved it i think you should make more i also read one called a force to be reckond with it was ok you should probly cheak it out keep up the good work
MikariStar chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
You did a great job with the poem. There are songs that sound as if they were made for a songfic, it's too bad ffnet doesn't allow them but song or not it's still a great story. Funny how Noah doesn't know how right he is when he called her 'teleporting' Betty. XD I loved this story. :)
InkyBlackRaven chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Well, I think that's the first Noah/Penelope story I've seen. 'Course, can't be too surprised if Betty's been disappearing for years, even if it is Penelope Lang. Never would have thought of those two myself, but, you managed to capture Penelope's reactions over time well even while making her recognizable as our favourite snob.
Barry I. Grauman chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Welcome aboard, 'Death's Soulmate'! I think you've written a very good interpretation of what could possibly happen in the future...Betty knew the risks of maintaining personal relationships when she became a Galactic Guardian...and Penelope "got" Noah! Or DID she? I have a sneaking suspicion that Noah will soon have-"pangs" for Betty while continuing his engagement

to Penelope {"You DO love me, don't you, Noah?"/"Huh?

Er, you know I do, Be-PENNY!"/"For YOUR sake, Noah darling, I do hope that was merely a gastric faux pas..."/"I don't have paws!"/"Oh, never mind, pumpkin, I'll do the thinking for bo-I mean, think how HAPPY we'll be when we're finally married!"/"Uh, yeah, I...guess so..."}. It could very well happen...!

I liked the intergrated song lyrics...GOOD! : )

I can imagine Penelope being a "knockout" at the Prom

in that outfit..and I believe it was Megan who passed the word about Noah's engagement to Betty, since Megan IS one of Penelope's closest friends-