|Reviews for Lost Benders of Henoa|
| Mei Fire chapter 3 . 6/28/2006
GASP! Bad fire nation soldiers! BAD!
(pwns them all)
| Billy chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
I liked your story. It was really creative. I also liked how you foreshadowed the curse, and the benders of the new element.
| Mei Fire chapter 2 . 1/22/2006
Heh heh. "Help! I can't swim!" But he was actually standing on the sandbank. ROFL.
| theprettysoldier chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Nice start. :D Please update quickly as I get bored and have nothing better to do...except maybe write my next chapter. HAH! but I'm lazy...UPDATE! ARRGH MATEY!
| Chaltab chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
It's short but not bad at all. Just one minor grammar mistake... repeated to death..
“You could have asked him nicely.” Said Katara.
It should read
"You could have asked him nicely," said Katara.
There oughta be a comma, not a period, and said should not be capitalized.