Reviews for Spying On You
miss missy chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
well your writting has definatly improved over the course of you story writting. and you have really good plots and great ideas. But I personally think you need to put more detail into your writting you kind of rush it along. Not that that is a bad thing in anway. I personally know as a writer that it hard to write! lol but idk, you can picture the whole story in your head vividly but if you put more detail such as feeling, character appearance, describe surrounds it will give the reader a chance you see what you see! and this in no way ment as a flame! and I know you havn't written for awhile but if you ever decided to start writting again, maybe my advice could help you!
Ella chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
i like your intro. i support sorato, joemi, takari, and kenako
deamrose10 chapter 3 . 11/13/2007
cliffhanger! nice one here..please update! ciao!
MikiUsako90 chapter 3 . 4/1/2007
I can't wait until the next chapter ] I love the plot!
Xio chapter 3 . 3/2/2007
HI. Getting interesting, so PLZ update son!PLZ?

Love,

Xio
Me chapter 2 . 9/23/2005
Koumi, and a triangle Yamato/Sora/Taichi as said before.
sango the demon extermanator chapter 2 . 8/11/2005
I have no idia but keep going!UPDATE!
xXxSoratoxXx65 chapter 2 . 8/6/2005
I think this should be Koumi or Michi! Either one i'm fine wif! . I really like this story update soon!
VeLvEt RoSe chapter 2 . 7/26/2005
u knw wt: make it a triangle (matt/sora/tai), im sure many will be very interested in reading it. oh and update more and mak ur chappies longer cuz we have been waitin for ur update in like foreva and now ur rewarding us with a small chapter!
KoumiLoccness chapter 2 . 7/24/2005
And you should make one Koumi! I never did like jyoumi fucc jyoumi.. Koumi Fan foe Life cuz..
theladyknight chapter 2 . 7/24/2005
Fast path to friendship, huh? Sora now has an excuse to spy on him without making it look like she's spying on him. lol! The meeting thing was kind of rushed, but it served it's purpose.

How'd Tai know who Sora was? And how'd Yamato know Sora's last class was Geometry? It'd be hiliarious if the guys were trying to spy on Sora. Nice chapter. Update soon!
KaNdE HoLiC BrAt chapter 2 . 7/24/2005
_ rreal good so far :D i wonder how sora's going to spy on matt... oh and joumi pleaase _ ill gib u cookies and kandies if u make it joumie *show cookies and all type of kandies*
Kari chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
I love it! Please update soon!
Jillianna chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
Hi! I just wanted to say, that you have improved so much as a writer. You're writing has improved so much from your first story, Kudos to You. I like the idea of this story, sounds like it'll be great, please continue!
AluminiaHolokauston chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
This sounds like a very promising story...update soon!
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