|Reviews for I Dare You|
| Lady Bobcat chapter 30 . 4/1
Great story! Got lost a few times but great none the less.
| Acciona chapter 30 . 3/22
The concept if the story is good but the delivery was slightly lacking. Although this is an AU the characters were very OC. The initial introduction of how Muteki came to be was "one night stand" but then it turns our they were dating. As this was clearly 21st, but there no explanation of why the characters were dating but not in physical relationship. Which if was explained could have added points to the story. Kikyo and Naraku characters were beyond OC and just didn't make sense. Also the introduction of new enemies felt rushed and with no substance or backstory. I normally ship and love SessRin characters. But the way Rin was portrayed made me dislike her. Also still don't get what Takahashis do. They are introduced as richest people in Japan. But no explanation what they do. When they work is introduced, it appears ti be some sort of magazine bussiness, but then they start talking about high end security development. Doesnt make sense. There were some inconsistencies, in one chapter a character is introduced as dying of lung cancer. But then he appears alive and well couple chapters later. There were a lot of grammatical errors too. Overall, as a story premise its good. But it could do with a rewrite to clarify and make the story flow better.
| Leleia chapter 30 . 10/19/2021
Loved this story!
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/23/2021
Nice concept but you’re actual writing abilities left much to be desired for me personally. Still enjoyed it though!
| wavey champ chapter 3 . 7/23/2021
After another reading at this fanfiction story there nothing mention about why Kagome is not staying with her son and living apartment with Sango. It doesn’t make sense why Kagome only comes on weekends to to take care of her son and not staying through out the weeks to take care of her son. It good that Kagome supporters doing child care how ever there studies that can make this irresponsible and bandit of not being around the child/children. Also I think the farther should of know about her being pregnant, stead of finding out years later. These are studies that I learned in child development.
| Mirage chapter 14 . 5/23/2021
Yes that is something every one did forget...kikyo...
And what should have been kagomes first question ...what is with kikyo... and a contract that he can't have contact to her.
| Mirage chapter 13 . 5/23/2021
So she really did give in...hmm. ..not sure if this was not to fast...
And kouga is right...sango should stop knocking miroku out cold each time he groped her...I mean she is his girlfriend. ..and if she does not like this ...maybe pinch him back hard where it hurt ...like belly neck eAR or sich. ...or elbow use... but over the head...can really make him so stupid that he possible will not know how to make babys...or can die..from brain damage..
| Mirage chapter 9 . 5/23/2021
So he sheeted at her ...told her she was bad in sex...and she runs away...really ? No fist to his nose and kick to the bal.s...for both him and kikjo?
Really ...and to tell her she was not so great with sex. ..I mean it needs two for tango... so he should have teached her...shown her how...should lead her. ...so it was his fault that she was not so good...and when kikjo is so good at gives some questions about her virtue...and how many males she was with to get so good...
| Mirage chapter 7 . 5/22/2021
And about this talk in school about mommy's and daddy's. ...what goes wrong with them...there are single parents (male or female) there are male male and female female parents too...or older grown up sibling or grandparent...and such. .. and why does this child need a father ..it is more like she needed a partner and father or so would not accept it all so fast ...after crying hate him so much before
| Mirage chapter 7 . 5/22/2021
I really don't get it. ..
How can she say she hates him... and then accept him so fast. ...
And to let a small child do as it wants to...and to stay with a man she does say she dislikes
And really ...she straps the child in ...what about a childs car chair...they need this at this age to be protected ...and it takes hell and high water with some to take out and then put this child seat into new car... and to strap in child tales time too.
| Mirage chapter 4 . 5/22/2021
Wow did she give in fast...don't get it...
And why was her sin so fixed on a father ..? When he did grow up the first three years of his life without one .but love of mother , grandmother grand grandfather and a cool uncle ...and other invle and aunts...there is no need or want for one as he dies not know one.. at least in this age ..teen he may ask for one...but as tiny child that is happy ...
| Mirage chapter 3 . 5/22/2021
So the Bastard impregnated her , let her fall like a hot potato next day or right after the dead...and hooked up with her cousin...sister...to find out the woman is cold fish and barren...and now his father wants a kid from him for his inheritances? ... he should go to classes for how not to be an ass..le and how to treat woman
| Mirage chapter 2 . 5/22/2021
He really should learn that a dare is not to marry someone who was a real ass bevor ...and tI marray sgold never be a dare...and the only way out where to sleep with him...? That can't be an accepted dare...
Or she should do a fake Vegas marriage where they are not real married...or do a contract ...like one bad word or swear OK look at different woman or talk name kikjo... from him they are divorced and he loose much of his property and money
| CreepyOtakuChan chapter 1 . 5/21/2021
Hello! I wanted to ask you if I could translate "I Dare You" into Spanish to make it on different ships, I would be very grateful if you gave me your permission. Obviously I would leave all the credits to you so that there would be no confusion :3
| Guest chapter 23 . 4/22/2021
i sense a lemon, and an interupted one at that... -_-'