Reviews for Two Things For One Fight
Guest chapter 3 . 7/23/2012
thank you god this moron dont write more XDDD
Anthony1l chapter 3 . 12/22/2011
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
pensuka chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
man this is surprising motoko sleeping in keitaro's bed with keitaro i definitly didnt see that coming at all here
volosaraptor chapter 3 . 4/27/2011
this is a great story when is the next chaptor commin out
MegaDarkly chapter 3 . 12/20/2010
I thought it was funny when he said "Man" and then went on a tangent. That was funny. The way he was talking was priceless.
redkama chapter 3 . 3/5/2010
i think the sortie was fu**ing epic it was way off key but damn it was fun to read
vanpiric heart chapter 3 . 2/15/2010
It's great, please update soon I would like to see what you've got planed for this story
Elizabeth Vida chapter 3 . 8/11/2009
You know I'm waiting for you to say that this was a dream or something, Am I suppose to think that because then you aare one hell of a writer then.
Meech Macko chapter 3 . 7/17/2008
This is Great so Keep it for LEMONS
George Mathew chapter 3 . 7/6/2008
HEY DONT PUT THE STORY ON HOLD NOW ITS GETTIN again add more LEMON Scene to it so more flavour to the story GET SOON (BEEN A YEAR)
BusoRuroniTaichi chapter 3 . 6/7/2008
:[ ] o_O? WHOA! Don't let it get too far! I'm a litlle green here... Nice ficcy by the way.
SentiNel090 chapter 3 . 3/20/2008
Now, this could be a great story, but please get a proofreader or learn to capitalize letters and place commas correctly...
Arieva LeFly chapter 3 . 2/15/2008
That's awesome story! I can't wiat till next chap. PLEASE? UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!
nightwing27 chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
good start way to keitaro that's how you get naru pissed
GodsFailedCreation chapter 3 . 1/27/2008
Dude this is awsome you just have to continue
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