Reviews for Pippin in Gondor
Vane Alasse chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Okay, so I just read your bio and noticed you're from the Pacific Northwest. That's awesome! So am I. :) Great place to live; I think the land here is inspirational for poetry.

But anyway...

This is a great poem. It really captures the heart of Tolkien's Pippin. I think in fan fiction there is often so much character altering, but you've managed to keep Pippin very true to the books. That's a huge credit to you!

The imagery in this piece is stunning. It's like I can see the banners over my head, feel the grey wind, sense the gnawing loneliness. Very moving. Beautiful.

Vané Alasse

PS If you get a chance, please check out some of my LotR poetry. I tend to write a little more on the serious side (similar to these poems) than most of the fanfic writers.
Raven-4ever chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
I like this! I kinda think that it's a bit too deep for Pippin, but this is a very nice poem!