Reviews for Treacherous Snowfall
Laiquendi chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
Hi again ! another great piece of work. Loved, "And the snow that caressed with velvet paws, Begins to unsheath its hidden claws." - great analogy of how the weather can turn nasty. Loved the last two lines also .
xdarkstarx chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Beatiful poem. I think it perfectly describes the way the fellowship felt during that time on the mountain. Beatiful.
Vane Alasse chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Wow. This is amazing. Beautiful use of language - it sounds like you've been out in the snow when the fun dies away before. Very good, and nice original idea for a poem.

I struggled with the meter, so getting through the poem was a bit difficult, but the excellent use of emotion and quite a few very good rhyming patterns made up for that.

Thanks for sharing this!

~Vane Alasse