Reviews for Kiss it Better!
EspirituDelMar chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
OMG this is the sweetest thing I‘ve ever read! KAWAII ! .
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Awww Zoro...!

That was so sly of you...!

XDD

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It was soooo ADORABLE!

Luffy need Zoro to kiss his hurt finger...

And now he kissed Zoro's hurt lips...

And now Zoro want it more...! XDDD

Awwwww...!

LOVE IT!
starspangledrogers chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
awww this is so sweet! i lurve zolu:3
can i just point out the sentence: Following his gaze, Zoro saw a dead hornet curled up, apparently dead.
it kinda strikes me as being weird XDD
aside from that, amazing!
keep up the good work
Jelly xx
roo17 chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Naughty zoro, taking advantage of Luffy's naiveness and kisses xD
CharmingKarma chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
SQUEEE! So adorable! *glomps*
Nayeli chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
aw, how cute, i liked it a lot!_

great fic!
Eternal Dumas chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
Haha, Zoro's so sneaky! Trying to get another kiss from Luffy by saying his lips still hurt... xP
PermanentNerd chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
KAWAII!
bubblegum-chi chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
that was so cute!XD

naughty, naughty, zoro..

tsk, tsk...
The Amazing'ly sexy'Dr.Riddles chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
Oh my! that was one of the cutest thing I've read in a while~ Loved it
SaruKaze chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
aw
Aloof chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
OMG THAT WAS SO ADORABLE! I've read it before but I just had to read it again! A most incredible job, I applaud you greatly. My only negative comment (for that story was near perfection) was that you said toothbrush instead of toothpaste at one point.

It says '"Thank you, Zoro!" Chopper said happily, pulling out a white square of cloth from a box on his desk. Flipping off the cap, he squeezed a thick blob of pearly white toothbrush onto the cotton.'

Yea so, other than that, PEFECTION!
coffeebutt121 chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
MG OMG GOMG SO CUTE! ,3 so fluffy! ~ "eah luffy..it still hurts.."
Colhan3000 chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
Yup you are correct! Toothpaste is the best in treating a bee sting! It drys the venom out of the wound and relives itching while helping to remove the stinger if there is one left! Ice should be used to stop the swelling...look at me I sound like a doctor!

Heh...Zoro your just as sly and Luffy aren't you?
Abandonded and Left chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
I'm not entirely sure why but I found your writing style to be very intertaining. I also loved the concept of this fic, good job! -

-FS
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