|Reviews for Middle School Cops|
| demolition18 chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
This was cool. I hope anyone else could write a fan fiction on this movie.
If I wrote this as a movie script it would say at the beginning fade in or fade out at the end and then there would be closing credits or opening credits put in.
| jilllovesshakespeare chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
a valiant effort, but a bit lacking... some advice:
1.) Your sixth grade teacher said "show don't tell." She was on to something.
2.) Decide whether this is prose or a movie script- it can't be both. If it's a movie script, your formatting is a bit out of whack. Maybe read a few and see how it's done?
3.) Grammar is God's gift to humanity. Don't piss off God.
| HeadChoirBoy chapter 10 . 6/25/2005
Excellent. I'd never thought I'd see the day that there'd be a fiction about this movie...