I'm confused as hell, but I can't deny that I love it.

cryptic, interesting, well-written. I'll have to read awakening. My one constructive comment is that using the line divider thingy more often would make it easier to read. The guidline I use is if the scene would change in the show, then put in the line, e.g. when you switch from the control room to the briefing room, Lagaria, or Jonas' dream/hallucination/vision/whatever, etc.