Very cool pls continue I loved it!️️️

I swear your fabrics are so touching and gorgeously written and IM NOT CRYING YOU ARE

So beautiful it hurts.

That was so sad, but so good.

I will definitely check out your other stuff. No promises on when, though.

I have a love-hate relationship with Ita-Sasu stuff. I mostly love Itachi, and I mostly hate Sasuke. When combined with your flair for making children cute, it's almost touching, not to mention disturbing because it mixes in the General Dysfunctional Family Syndrome (parents arguing at night, faked smiles in the day etc).

There's some interesting insight in the last chapter on the two brothers' relationship; boiling revenge mixing into eternal chasing.

Thanks for this!

Heheh cute story lol I like the cute little itasasu fluff

Oh, i have no words. this was so painful to read, but beautiful, nonetheless, especially knowing itachi's true motivations.

“Will you love me forever Sasuke?”

“Mm-hm,” Sasuke murmured somniferously

“Do you promise?”

“I promise…”

“Even if it hurts?”

“I don't want it to hurt…”

I wanted to cry...

Wonderfully written, as always.

... Hm, yea... im at a loss for words it seems, theres no way id be able to describe the effect of the emotion of this writing, my poor dicription wouldnt be enough anyway, surely, so i'll just say, you. are. an. extodinary. writer. end of story.

Esthesia sounds like amnesia

The first third of the fanfictin almost made me cry! XP

It's so sad. but I love it.

I LURVE IT!

Oh my god! That was kinda sad! Not the crying sad, more like the, 'woah, dude' kinda sad. Y'know? Well, whatever. Awesome story, by the way. Loved the ending.

aw! cute! nice job!

Wow. Very intense fic, the first and last chapters were my definite favorites. I liked the first because it was cute how Itachi was the decent older brother he used to be and Sasuke was the happy innocent kid.

And then in the last chapter where he's a little older and how you described how he feels. How he's totally shattered, it's so fitting for him. You did an amazing job at describing that and I loved this line: There was still a broken little boy trapped inside of him, wanting to cling to his older brother when the nightmares came.