Reviews for Evil Be Thou My Good |
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heidlebergchick chapter 1 . 11/4 I really enjoyed this, thank you for your hard work. |
SimplyAdventures chapter 1 . 11/3 really enjoyed this one. |
mrpietan chapter 1 . 10/28 Damn good! |
Fuck Names chapter 1 . 10/19 Harry was quite smart in this, a rare occurrence. Good story. |
johnny99 chapter 1 . 7/29 Amazing story, very intense and unique! Thanks for writing. |
RevDorothyL chapter 1 . 7/1 Scary and creepy and horrid, and yet so very satisfying! |
RubinCompServ chapter 1 . 6/16 To the moron who posted anonymously on June 14th: Have you managed to get through the story yet? I understand that you were in such a rush to comment that you couldn't even be bothered to actually read the entire story, so I'm baffled by why you haven't graced us with more of your pithy insights. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14 Ok. I'm half way through this and that...plan...to let them into the school better pay off. Because it looks fucking stupid right now. |
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 1 . 5/31 Have you read the Clive Barker books that the movies is based on? The Hellbound Heart is pretty good, tho I am still working on reading The Scarlet... I forget the name of that book. If you have, what do you think of the books vs the movies? |
Malabolg chapter 1 . 4/2 A wonderful crossover. It could use a final scene, thoughan older Harry, one who couldn’t resist baiting other victims the way he baited Umbridge into using the box, finally opening the box himself one more time. Is it penance? Or did he finally give in to that horrible curiosity? |
fan-275 chapter 1 . 1/20 Wow, I haven't read a story like this in a while. |
pincho chapter 1 . 1/14 Disturbingly amazing |
FriendlyFire59 chapter 1 . 1/9 Wow, talk about interesting use of resources. I liked the people getting what they deserve. I did absolutely love how Harry slapped Albus in the face with his own words when he stared getting upset about Snape! Thanks for posting |
BRICKDUST chapter 1 . 12/16/2023 Awesome story |
wiebenor chapter 1 . 12/4/2023 Ok... here's my review... first of all, do I like this, yes, I do, after a fashion. However, I must point out that even though it's only around 40k words, it feels like it was way more, and as such, I believe that this could use a good chapter scheme to make it feel shorter. Second of all, there were a few spots, especially in the great hall when Harry reopened the puzzle box, that had really unnecessary and weird feeling scene changes, for instance, when he opens the box and darkness appears in the great hall, BOOM, the time and date appears, to welcome you to the... great hall mere seconds after the last scene ended?! I mean seriously, how is THAT change in action, worthy of a visible scene change notification? I mean seriously, while I liked the story, you need to stop overusing the "scene change" writing styles, in my opinion, just based on that last bit alone... Maybe someday this could be rewritten to be more "story" style, and less "oneshot style, so that it just hits my "cringe writing" senses better?(that's the best way I can find to describe how I feel reading this despite how much I love it) Pretty please? |