Reviews for The Lady Eowyn
HeartoftheArtsari chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
Sad lament that grows to show the promise of her happiness. I liked the last lines and the lines describing her tresses. Nice images!
CherryBlossomTrinity chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
I have not read The Lady of Shallot in a long time, but I definitly love this. It's beautiful, and I think you're a wonderful poet. Definitly going in my favorites!
AscendingRain chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
I love this poem. It's so beautiful. It works so well with the original rhyming scheme and pattern. You must have worked long ad hard on it. Have you heard the song that Loreena McKennitt sang? It's The Lady of Shalott put to music and it is so pretty. If you haven't you can find it if you look for it in the Explore the Music section of It's an awesom song.

But I'm off topic. I tend to do that. Beautiful Language. A sure favourite. Keep writing!
Erugenel chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
i love your adaption of the poem! it really reflects the way eowyn led her life all the way to the end.
Vane Alasse chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
Oh my goodness this is amazing! I love the Lady of Shallot, and this is a fantastic rendition of it LotR style. :) The rhyming was flawless, which, considering the length of this poem, is quite stunning.

These are my favorite parts:

Perilous the paths they're taking

Men concerned with war in making.

Left behind, tho' heart be breaking

Despairing Eowyn.

And in her chambered cell she cries

As cousin, friend, and uncle dies

Upon the plains, and in the skies

The wraith of Mordor kingly flies

Above the mighty Rohirrim.

In lines of steel her fair face tearing



~Vané Alasse