|Reviews for Burden|
| A Mistake chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
The characters were themselves, but no plot so far, so I can't say much about 's probably the story's weakness, it's a good establishing shot, but the real story hasn't come around yet.
| Melinda Coulson chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Aw, that was nice.
| Joanie S chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
Those two make me cry sometimes. Great fic.
| Thyphy chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
XD I loved the end. when she said "we're old" I though 'ah, they'll cuddle a bit' but OMG she slept XD poor Jiraya!
| mirai3k chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
oh lovely! *sigh* they are so angsty but adorable. It's weary timeless love all the way! write more of em plz! There isn't enough in the world.
| ToCryCrimsonTears chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
T.T aw that was so cute!
| GaArA LuVeR chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
It's pretty good, but slightly boring...
| Jasmine Starlight chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
its orochimaru...im sorry but grammar bothersmee.
i had a grammar nazi teacher man/lady and so im scared for life.