Reviews for Burden
A Mistake chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
The characters were themselves, but no plot so far, so I can't say much about 's probably the story's weakness, it's a good establishing shot, but the real story hasn't come around yet.
Melinda Coulson chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Aw, that was nice.
Joanie S chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
Those two make me cry sometimes. Great fic.
Thyphy chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
XD I loved the end. when she said "we're old" I though 'ah, they'll cuddle a bit' but OMG she slept XD poor Jiraya!

kya loveable~
mirai3k chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
oh lovely! *sigh* they are so angsty but adorable. It's weary timeless love all the way! write more of em plz! There isn't enough in the world.

ToCryCrimsonTears chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
T.T aw that was so cute!
GaArA LuVeR chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
It's pretty good, but slightly boring...
Jasmine Starlight chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
its sorry but grammar bothersmee.

i had a grammar nazi teacher man/lady and so im scared for life.