Reviews for Tin Star
Karieflybabe chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Nice job. "Is there a dragon?" "Is he a Jedi?" "How old are you?" LOL...
Zassa chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
I love it:-)
cryogenie chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Holy. Freaking. Crap.

Now I want to cry.

Please tell me that you plan to write additional chapters? What happens next? Is Tony okay? Was he protected by the vest? Does Katie [that made me wibble, thank you very much] make it out? Does Gibbs make it out? WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?

Seriously, this story rocks. Please write more? I'll give you a cookie...
SKRoberts chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
*clings to Tony*
Lucygoosey chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Wow! Very, very good!
shirik chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
please add more chapters! i love this one!

tnx
DinozzoFan chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Cool, weird but cool. i like it
jewelbaby chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Aw Cute banter between Little Katie and Tony. And of course Gibbs being his gruff self.
Sariana of Wind chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
great story, will you do a sequel? i think you should.
boscoslut chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Wow! Even if you went over the 10 words, that was great! You are doing great at NCIS fics. Keep them coming. :)
ML Only chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Whew - for someone who's never written NCIS before - this is an excellent beginning! Love it! Well done! Very Tony, very Gibbs...thoughtfully put together. A lovely piece.
BH chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Wait, did he die? Did he and Katie die? Or is he just delusional? Nice story though. :) Your characters seem right on and your writing is very good. I enjoy the movie references Tony does even though so far I don't think I've seen even one of them. :) It's a cool personality quirk he has and this was a fun challenge you came up with to use that. Keep on writing!
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