I seemed to have missed the last three words of the story summary before I read this.

ONE SHOT?

nonoono, you must continue!

Really, when I first read it, it felt like there was going to be more. With Narcissa's knowledge of things, the unknown status of Hermione's feelings.. Lucius faintin in the middle of this all. That was a cliffhanger!

Narcissa's last line was a cliffhanger!

If you choose to write more, I'll be super happy.

If not, then I will content myself with this one shot.

There's something to think about! :)

Take that Lucius. I like it. Awesome one-shot.

LOL! I love Narcissa in your fic! She's portrayed as the one who's really in charge, someone who knows their son well and wants the best for him. I love this type of Narcissa who is smart and has Lucius around her finger. She knows the faults of her husband and Draco, but she loves Draco. I jus tlike this Narcissa.

In one scene where Narcissa observes Hermione, her descriptions go beyond the regular female appraisal/criticizing. It felt like it was infused with a male perspective, or maybe even the writer's to explain how curvy she was. At the same time, maybe Narcissa is like that.. perhaps it was just the wording. :)

Blaise's last name is Zabini, without the m.

Lucius should have fainted, not feinted. (with an 'a' not 'e') You might want someone to look your fic over for spelling and canon facts. The overall tone is good, but there is that thing I mentioned in the paragraph above.

Narcissa and her keen observation, telling Lucius to be silent. Very well done. I love her here, and I cannot wait to see her pull the strings and get them together. As for daughter-in-law, it seems a bit early. :) let's see how Hermione feels first.. and see how they get along together. ;)

At this moment, I don't see the relationship between the title and the story. Who is the pureblood and what are they making their debut into? Narcissa is making observations and she is pureblood, but she's not a debutante.

I really enjoyed this, I cannot wait to read more! Please update soon.

Are you sure it has to be complete? I'm itching to read what has happened and what will happen with their relationship. I like it a lot. Beautifully written, lovely choice of language and wording.

I think it's the subtleties in this that make it such an enjoyable read. It's the little things like an extra word of description about Hermione's hair, and the way Narcissa's mind unravels everything.

Wonderfully done. Although I'm hoping you would consider expanding? with another chapter or so? :)

Love, Leaves

Very interesting to say the least. I do believe a mother catches things about her children that others don't see. A special connection I guess. It was quite good, but I am a little sad that's in only a one shot..

Karalyn

LOL! Loved it.

Beautiful fic, I loved the way you described the dance and the way both women observed and instantly knew what was wrong and what was right. And the way you ended! Marvelous! I can only imagine the look on Lucius' face before fainting! Must've been hilarious! I loved it!

wai! lovely ficcie! absolutly loved it! )

im not going to lie, i thought this was amazing lol. it was really well writen i kind of hope u would make it into a story, just to see how it had gotten to this point, or keep it going after this point. it was really good over all though! : )

WOAH! yet another great story! keep up the good work!

LOL absolutely magnificent! I love it.

aw... i love narcissa now, i love it when she is the supporting mother...thoved her last quote!

*slight grammar mistake... "he had FAINTED dead away," not FEINTED...

That was totally excellent, you could easily make it more than a one shot though. It would be cool to see how Hermione gets to the 'daughter in law' status.

Great fic, and that ending was just perfect!

“Lucius, you will never speak that way about my future daughter in law again. Do you understand me?”

hahahahhahahaha.

this is amazing. i like how its from her point of view, i dont think ive ever read that before. it rocks.

lol. lucius. :)