|Reviews for For a Future|
| MasterShaper chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Makes me wonder if Vivi actually knew that he was cutting short his life by creating his children, but hid that fact the KNEW from the other Mages...
A good story, nonetheless.
Till next time,
| Captain Kurt Hoffman chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
Now that is a deep story, and nicely done.
| Malevalla chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
So very cute and sweet! I wish there were more fanfics out there like this one. So many have good plot ideas. But the grammer, spelling, and redundantness make it painful to read. I didn't notice a singal mistake in this one, though!
| Angel Taisha chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
That was a wonderful piece! It was nice to read about Vivi and the impact he made on Gaia after he stopped. It really moved me. What a gift you have for writing!It's a dying trait to have on this site. I was very happy to find this great read amongst all of the badly written, poorly misspelled trash.
It's nice to know my friends and I on here aren't the only ones that pay attention and truly care enough about our writings to proof them before displaying.
| link no miko chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Told ya this before, but I just love this. It's so cute and lovely, but with a hint of sadness to it, just like the Black Mages and Vivi. I love how they don't give up, no matter what, which is such a human trait and yet they're genetically engineered. It's like they earned their freedom and humanity and I think I'm just spouting things now but yah.
Love how you gave a reason for Vivi's children, since the game never did.
Very very nice.
| Myshu chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Vivi village... heh! A cute and sweet drabble. Heroes may die(stop?), but legends live forever.