Reviews for Training for the Job
SophiaElph chapter 6 . 8/23
Venom Spirit chapter 13 . 6/10
Damn... you just blew my mind with that hokage no jutsu... to utilize a true to form shapeshift jutsu that is his sexy jutsu to reconstitute his body from organic matter into a mad dash ball of flames, the potential energy from that type of energy conversion into the blast would be massive, enough to go past fire and into plasma, actually, like detonating a micro-star almost. But then in naruto versu physics to apply such a transformation... You've inspired me, and I wish to know if I can use some material of yours for a possible fanfiction of my own, because that was bloody well done.
peregrine829 chapter 75 . 5/4
You've mentioned before that you might go years without updates and, boy, you weren't kidding! I've been following this fic for maybe ten years now. No commentary on the chapter, just a (very) long time fan hoping to see an update. Thanks!
sanjiyanunkara chapter 15 . 3/14
Why use a wagon train when you have sealing scrolls ? Heck you have a sealing master on hand !
BTW: i'm sure Gai would have been all over that hidden village name! lol
LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 6 . 3/10
Man sakura is such a bitch
Facepalmistry chapter 75 . 2/23
And finally got around to catching up. Have continued to enjoy this, and much respect for not knuckling down to reviewers' wishes to de-Joss the fic - consistency is king, IMO. (Also got round to reading the Mediaminer lemon, and you indeed did well not to leave out anything plot-heavy in the censored version. Always nice not to have to read the porn to keep up with the plot...)

Was also relieved to see the 6-year gap in updates. Gives me hope this one isn't as dead as it otherwise appears yet.
Guest chapter 74 . 1/29
You said you were semi-retired from writing fanfiction. Since it's been awhile since you've updated, are you now fully retired?
antibullshit chapter 75 . 12/30/2016
what with when narusaku is the ship ino has to be in love or close friendship with naruto thats lame its not even canon getting tired of this type of shit she should be with shikacho her friends her team not with sakuras
NaruSakuIno20 chapter 40 . 12/7/2016
hey chapter 7 . 11/18/2016
Yo I'm reading this cause I'm curious but what the fuck Sakura is an absolute waste and you make naruto out as a love crazed idiot I know this is fiction but jesus you just make naruto look like a weak pussy who just cares about his "Sakura-chan" because of a promise he made when he was 5 you can't make him a fucking retard in one aspect and a savant in another but hey it's your story so do what ya want
cassianiordache chapter 31 . 11/2/2016
Some things just don't make any sense when you're . Can I borrow this as a status?
Happy1K1nob1 chapter 15 . 10/23/2016
summary idea:
Offered A-Rank pay for a low-danger mission, Yamanaka Ino would be an absolute fool to ignore it. But when she ends up moving in with Sakura as a result, the pinkette's world is thrown upside-down, and the Elemental Nations' fate hangs in the balance. SakuNaru.

...what do you think? Also, I'm rather enjoying this so far. :)
Shaydrall chapter 1 . 7/31/2016
So, I understand that you've been away from this scene in some capacity (who knows what you've been up to tbh), but here is my opinion on what you've given us, after one chapter. Your writing is fine, your story is yours, and I can suspend my own likes and dislikes to see what you've decided to go with. I've seen what other people have written and the comments are both positive and negative, typical of any fic. My response really comes in two points.
A fic should always have a summary. You're only getting people to not read your writing by posting it like it is currently. As a writer myself I can't relate to this at all, though I feel it stems to the second point I have. Readers are just people. They have their opinions, and as much as they matter I really feel there is no reason to become aggressive about it. The tone that your first chapter started with was entirely negative. "I've done stuff you may not like, deal with it." Well, no kidding if they actually read your fic they'll have to deal with it whether you say it or not. So why say it at all? If you want to say your fic lacks certain things then just say so. No need to take a shot at the very thing that makes your fic actually worth something more than kilobytes on your PC.

So that's my advice. Let it go. Until you do you'll never shine as the writer you have the potential to be.
Shadeslayers of Chosen Ones chapter 25 . 7/15/2016
jubub2327 chapter 43 . 6/25/2016
I've Always felt that tournaments were very much a chore to read but I also understand that it was very necessary to write one in your situation. You handled it pretty well though. So far this is one of my all time favorite fics though.

Though this is unrelated to this chapter, I'd like to say that I really liked the way that you gave deeper meaning to Naruto's proclamation that he is "gonna be hokage one day..." Very smooth with the way you worked his saying into a self sacrificing kinjutsu using the literal meaning of hokage.
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