And it all amounts to this. 26 chapters of the most dogshit, unhealthy relationship goes out with a whimper.

The thing is that if you actually decided to write this story from the vantage where Sakura was an emotional abuser, taking advantage of Naruto, and that other people could see it, then maybe it has merit. But no, somehow you've glorified her into some hero who was willing to do anything to save someone from the 'darkest pits of insanity' while still leading Naruto on, keeping him around as a backup option just in case. Actually fucking insane.

This is quite literally by the worst NaruSaku relationship I've read on this entire site and I don't think I can say that it's hyperbole.

A delusional 16 year old girl thinking she's some of sort of savior by acting like a bitch and a hypocrite.

It's chapters like these that make this story awful in my opinion. Your writing of Naruto and this devout loyalty towards a girl who is straight up leading him on. Just because she says she's not doesn't mean otherwise. Even if Sakura ends up picking Naruto in the end, its still a sour feeling due to how awful she's acting right now.

Naruto isn't even a fucking human in this story. You've turned him into a yes-man doormat for Sakura to do whatever she wishes. Willing to be alone for the rest of his life if she doesn't pick him, willing to fucking commit suicide for her. No human being acts likes this and is considered healthy in any manner. It's fucking disgusting and here you are romanticizing it. God awful story

The level of devotion that your Sakura is showing towards Sasuke is bordering on insanity. Never get over him for the rest of her life? In what way has their previous interactions garnered such a level of fanaticism from her? It's unreal.

At the same time, you do the same thing with Naruto. Making him completely destroy any sense of self-worth.

It’s because the four tails is Son Goku

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Again, I realize this was written almost 2 decades ago, but the yellow flash used the hirashin or flying thunder God not shunsin most ninja can use that one. It’s a basic technique.

I love the red wolves in this. They are nearly extinct and they are my favorite wolf. They are native to my home state although they are no longer found here now there’s only about 25 of them left in the wild.

you forgot to add the senju the creators of the leaf to the founding clans…

For the record anko is younger than kakashi

From what I’ve read, the two techniques are different than chidori is a rank lightning blade is s rank

So I will explain for you the chidori is the a ranked version the lightning blade is closer to us rank. It has more power from what ive read

I am glad you did not delete this story because of all the commentary. I just got into this Fandom and an so happy to have read your story.

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Isn't Tsunade the Hokage? So she wouldn't be bound by the 3rd's law to not tell others about Naruto's status so she should be able to tell Ino ... she might have chosen not to but saying she can't is a bit .. odd