|Reviews for Training for the Job|
| The King of Anachronisms chapter 23 . 12/11/2012
The hindsight killed me this chapter
| Zatheko chapter 73 . 12/6/2012
This story was really good despite being made so long ago, a shame it was never finished :(
| Quazillionaire chapter 73 . 11/30/2012
A very engaging story. 9/10, I'd say. My only problems are:
1) The myriad spelling and grammar errors, but since you did warn us about that I guess I can't really complain.
2) There were a few decisions about certain things that I personally thought were a bit ridiculous. It's hard to bring them all to mind, but I thought some of them took a bit away from the credibility of the story.
Otherwise, I have enjoyed it quite a bit so far. I hope it continues. Keep up the good work!
| Sanit09 chapter 73 . 11/27/2012
This is a good story but why hasn't it been updated in such a long time?
| kidloco chapter 11 . 11/23/2012
love that fanfic, i wish can read new chapters
| fooly cooly chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
everytime i read, i get in love wiht the history
when you will back wiht new chapter?
| Omirao chapter 30 . 10/11/2012
The world of your story really comes alive because of how well developed and real all of your characters are. Sure, for some characters we only see a glimpse, but it's a glimpse that infers and references deeper thought processes and characterizations, all with just the perfect amount of detail. It's so captivating!
As far as the proper spelling for the name Gatou... if you were to use actual romaji (the japanese approved method of spelling with a romanized alphabet, which is NOT actually japanese-japanese people don't use it) the proper spelling would vary between Gatou and Gato, except the latter would have an accented "o" (I don't recall the name for the accent, but it elongates the vowel) that I don't think FFnet allows, so I would reccomend the former for the best representation of the name.
The difference between the spellings using romaji only depends on which system of romaji you use, and that isn't important unless you're trying to teach the proper kana for spelling it in actual Japanese.
Anyway, the important thing to remember is that in Japanese all words end in either a vowel or the consonant "n", so if you care about using "proper" romaji (which you might not and I wouldn't blame you as it's useless unless you're trying to learn Japanese) ending a word with an "h" is not feasible.
Which leads to an interesting trivia-Lee's surname does not fit the language pattern of any known country in the Narutoverse! So, where in the world did his family come from?
| Omirao chapter 23 . 10/11/2012
There are a lot of nitpicks in your reviews... mainly because you ask for them, both literally and by your tendency to respond so much when one is given and by your tendencies to explain so many steps of your reasoning in writing things a certain way, obviously in an attempt to keep people from commenting. My advice (even though you've probably stopped reading these) is to stop caring. Your AN's are too long and too frequent, and it shows that it really gets to you when people comment-like I am now-and makes it very hard to resist doing so even though I (so easily) know it bothers you.
Anyway, I want you to know how impressed I am at how very realistic your portrayal of your character's relationships are. If people are telling you it's developing too slowly that's because they clearly haven't evolved enough to read intelligent writing. I guarantee they're the ones who keep the notoriously low quality "romance" (read: non-restricted literary porn) novels in such high circulation. If you could bring yourself to stop reacting over every comment that comes your way-even when they're irritating-then you could really go professional with some original works. I applaud your skill, and the intelligence with which you write.
Thank you for posting.
| Omirao chapter 15 . 10/10/2012
Regarding the summary-This fic qualifies as an AU. In my extensive AU reading experience, the summaries are more frequently describing what made their Narutoverse different instead of actually giving a synopsis. So, you could put something like:
"After their epic battle, Gaara makes a request that opens a lot of eyes-and hearts"
Or something else similarly vague and basic that describes that key trigger that changes your Narutoverse from cannon. In my personal opinion, having no summary is worse than having a poor one. Still, you've really managed to catch my attention and keep it with your actual story, summary or no, so I don't believe you need to worry about that.
Thank you for what is thus far an enrapturing and well devised fic. I have high hopes for the remaining 59 chapters, and look forward to reading more of your excellent work.
| kingrobert84 chapter 14 . 8/26/2012
only one problem with this anko is and has been in the t&i for the entire time from what ive been able to gleam and right under ibiki morino the head of t&i sorry if you already knew this
| kingrobert84 chapter 12 . 8/26/2012
its uzuki yugao and matsuris a suna nin and im sorry for pointin out the obvious if you already knew
| SwordzMaster97 chapter 73 . 8/25/2012
please pick this back up i love this fanfic
| Silent Bunshin chapter 29 . 8/21/2012
I found a syntax error in this chapter where you used "She" instead of "He". Also, at the end of the same paragraph, you spelled receive wrong. My spelling of it is correct.
These errors are located in the end of following paragraph of this chapter, which I have supplied for you:
"I fear," Ino replied cautiously. "That Sasuke is not fully able to control his own actions. His family line is cursed with insanity. The Uchiha, however, kept that inbred insanity a secret, knowing many tricks for stopping the psychotic delusions before it took hold in a person. His entire clan, however, was destroyed, and he was left an orphan. If a proper treatment is applied, she should return to his old self - more or less - but the longer he goes without treatment the less likely he is to recieve it."
I know this story is old and I am a late reader, but I figured you would want to know.
| Guest chapter 35 . 8/9/2012
4 L of the leaf village what up nickname was the yellow flash out the Golden flash
| Giselle chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I love this, its beautiful. Sakura rocks, Naruto is so lucky to get her