Reviews for Training for the Job
Narutofan chapter 23 . 4/2/2013
I like this story but I hate the part about where Anko reveals herself to be Naruto's mother. It is revealed that his mother is named, "Kushina", whereas his dad, the fourth hokage, is named, "Minato". Furthermore, Kushina's last name was Uzumaki and Minato's last name was Namikaze. I don't like the fact that Anko is Naruto's mom. Kushina was more prestigious and Minato more prestigious than Arashi or Anko is. You can manipulate stuff, but just not stuff about Naruto's parentage pleasee... I beg you...not THAT stuff...
leafstone chapter 73 . 3/31/2013
great story.
Zachary916 chapter 63 . 2/23/2013
Lol this story is awsome.
The little speech was sorta cheesy, but hey, all of those kinds of speeches are cheesy. Awsome story
Zachary916 chapter 62 . 2/23/2013
Well," Konoha said, a bit surprised at how his intention to bring his baby to meet his folks had evolved. "It seems we've got a plan."
Konoha just got ALOT more interesting XD
Zachary916 chapter 23 . 2/9/2013
I've never seen a story with her as the mother...interesting.
Remakeillusions chapter 47 . 12/28/2012
You said 'son of the Hokage again' :P

Also pleeeeaseeee finish this story its really interesting. You cant leave me hanging :P
Zerosixnine2011 chapter 73 . 12/13/2012
Awwe, man! C'mon! You gotta finish this story! This is too amazing of a storyline to leave hanging!
The King of Anachronisms chapter 23 . 12/11/2012
The hindsight killed me this chapter
Zatheko chapter 73 . 12/6/2012
This story was really good despite being made so long ago, a shame it was never finished :(
Quazillionaire chapter 73 . 11/30/2012
A very engaging story. 9/10, I'd say. My only problems are:
1) The myriad spelling and grammar errors, but since you did warn us about that I guess I can't really complain.
2) There were a few decisions about certain things that I personally thought were a bit ridiculous. It's hard to bring them all to mind, but I thought some of them took a bit away from the credibility of the story.

Otherwise, I have enjoyed it quite a bit so far. I hope it continues. Keep up the good work!
Sanit09 chapter 73 . 11/27/2012
This is a good story but why hasn't it been updated in such a long time?
kidloco chapter 11 . 11/23/2012
love that fanfic, i wish can read new chapters
fooly cooly chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
everytime i read, i get in love wiht the history

when you will back wiht new chapter?
Omirao chapter 30 . 10/11/2012
The world of your story really comes alive because of how well developed and real all of your characters are. Sure, for some characters we only see a glimpse, but it's a glimpse that infers and references deeper thought processes and characterizations, all with just the perfect amount of detail. It's so captivating!

As far as the proper spelling for the name Gatou... if you were to use actual romaji (the japanese approved method of spelling with a romanized alphabet, which is NOT actually japanese-japanese people don't use it) the proper spelling would vary between Gatou and Gato, except the latter would have an accented "o" (I don't recall the name for the accent, but it elongates the vowel) that I don't think FFnet allows, so I would reccomend the former for the best representation of the name.

The difference between the spellings using romaji only depends on which system of romaji you use, and that isn't important unless you're trying to teach the proper kana for spelling it in actual Japanese.

Anyway, the important thing to remember is that in Japanese all words end in either a vowel or the consonant "n", so if you care about using "proper" romaji (which you might not and I wouldn't blame you as it's useless unless you're trying to learn Japanese) ending a word with an "h" is not feasible.

Which leads to an interesting trivia-Lee's surname does not fit the language pattern of any known country in the Narutoverse! So, where in the world did his family come from?
Omirao chapter 23 . 10/11/2012
There are a lot of nitpicks in your reviews... mainly because you ask for them, both literally and by your tendency to respond so much when one is given and by your tendencies to explain so many steps of your reasoning in writing things a certain way, obviously in an attempt to keep people from commenting. My advice (even though you've probably stopped reading these) is to stop caring. Your AN's are too long and too frequent, and it shows that it really gets to you when people comment-like I am now-and makes it very hard to resist doing so even though I (so easily) know it bothers you.

Anyway, I want you to know how impressed I am at how very realistic your portrayal of your character's relationships are. If people are telling you it's developing too slowly that's because they clearly haven't evolved enough to read intelligent writing. I guarantee they're the ones who keep the notoriously low quality "romance" (read: non-restricted literary porn) novels in such high circulation. If you could bring yourself to stop reacting over every comment that comes your way-even when they're irritating-then you could really go professional with some original works. I applaud your skill, and the intelligence with which you write.

Thank you for posting.
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