. . . o.O *jaw dropping noise* HOLY RAMEN NOODLES! Damn! And here I thought the Naruto fic I was writing was gonna be good...I bow down to the ultimate Naruto fic writer I've ever had the pleasure of reading the work of. WOW! Update soon okay? I was just browsing through the Naruto fics when I clicked on yours. And ever since I read the first few paragraphs, I've been hooked! _ keep up the good work! The only critique I have is that Ino is starting to get a little...I don't know...lonely? I know it's just me, but is there ANY possibility of her finding someone to be with? Other than that...THIS FIC IS KiCk-AsS!

good chapter. im suprised it came so quick. i dont really like how much ino it interfering with naruto and sakura, it seems unrealilistic. besides that update soon

Well this was another awesome chapter. I have to say that I rather liked the way that the two 'Naruto's' got along with eachother. Anyways, that 'hokage no jutsu' was a pretty crazy technique, and I thought it was awesome as well. It'd be devastating if he was able to make the same kind of clones as Ino and be able to use it in a fight. Anyways, I really love the way the story is going and I hope that things will keep going well. You've also got me curious now as to who Naruto's mother is now that you've said that. Will she be someone we all know or some own charcter that you've made up, it's really got me thinking and I can't wait till you let us know, along with some possible fourth hokage fighting techniques or something like that. Hope you can update again soon, you're awesome.

Yet another fantastic chapter. Keep up the excellent work.

Best,

~JohnnyG

hey awesome chapter. this story is coming along great man, i can't wait to read what happens next. i think naruto's secret technique is different. but its very creative, the thing you thought of.i just thought that, he learned to turn into kyubbi form, and control it. of course, it wouldn't be his full form, but rather just like partly kyubbi form. Like when he fought sasuke. He's like that, and could control it. i thought that was his secret techinque. it makes sense with your story sorta too. like, he has to be calm, because if he isn't he''ll lost control and so go on a killing spree. that's what i thought. well, can't wait to read more. Ja ne

damn man that was some tight shit right there i cant believe it i actully shed a tear for the clone

hah! freakin' sweet! That was really touching and dramatic, and it's obvious that the relationship between sakura and naruto is finally coming to full blossom. Aw, they care about each other, so cute. Right, well, it's a great chapter, and you updated so soon too. wowie wowie wow wow! ooh boy, lost myself for a moment. Totally freakin' sweet.

'sigh' you're literally the only person that's updated for me today. thanks a lot. please update again soon. Hokage no Jutsu ehh? (Art of the Fire Shadow?)

Aw, that's so sweet. )

Please update soon...again xD

Excellent chapter.

Seems the date went well, knowing Naruto he wouldn't get mad, not the kind of person to react that way.

Be interesting to see what this 'training' will involve.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

hey nice fic but ... iwas kinda wondiring is it a narux saku or a sasuxsakuxnaru in future chapters ... and i kinda like ino in this fic for the first time so is it there gonna be any shikaxino ... please lut there be no sasuxino lut him suffer for once ... any way i like your fic so hope ya update soon

Great job with this chapter Desaix, and you resolved the "mindwalk" issue with Ino rather brilliantly. A very Naruto like response ;) . Keep it up with the Sakura/Naruto fluff. We need more!

i wouldn't have expected Naruto to blow up when finding out Ino did a mind walk on him. Actually, the reaction you depicted is none other than what I would have expected from him. It's more like him to say something like "Oh yeah! I get it", and you did it perfectly. cool.

It was a longer chapter, but I NEVER complain about longer chapters... Who honestly would? It's really good, but that's just repetition of all your previous chapters and the ones I've not yet read. I can't believe how good this is. I'm doing a Naruto Sakura story, and even though they're together throughout most of it, the relationship is not nearly is well written. How are you a GOD?

That was a pretty cool chapter, but I can't quite place the relevance of "Shardes of Glass" to the song. It's actually on the tip of my tongue, but I can't get it out. It's only vaugely familiar. I guess I COULD just look at your other reviews to see who guessed, but I'll wait.