Reviews for Training for the Job
Chocobaby chapter 4 . 7/1/2005
Great chapter! XD XD

Wow! Sakura now has a 'bloodline'! And she doesn't know anything! P

Can't wait for more!
Hitokiri Jotham chapter 4 . 7/1/2005
Good chapter. Keep it up.

Raikiri and Chidori are the same technique. Raikiri is the nickname of Chidori. You can look at the fight between Gaara and Sasuke for reference to that.

Okay.. update soon!
GnawRogue16 chapter 4 . 7/1/2005
o...did Naruto already leave or something?
maxhrk chapter 4 . 7/1/2005
good job, i have seen no errors so far and.. it is good chapter too. :)
PuckReathof chapter 4 . 7/1/2005
Desaix, your story is working well so far, I like the fact that you're using the 2.5 year gap to fill in what's been going on while Naruto is off training and such, and will hopefully detail what happens then as well. One thing I want to mention is that from what I can tell, the difference in Chidori vs Raikiri is perhaps 'evolution'. The initial Jutsu that Kakashi made was named Chidori, 'one thousand birds' for it's high pitched noise. This is what he taught to Sasuke. The first time Raikiri is mentioned is when Gai speaks of it during the Chuunin exam fight of Gaara V Sasuke. He alludes to Kakashi having used it to cut a lightning bolt and that's when it was named Raikiri (Lightning Edge). I think that the initial jutsu in it's most basic form is the 'Chidori'. I think that there are different levels of mastery, and the highest, or what Kakashi has achieved currently, is what is referred to as the Raikiri, the jutsu that can cut through a lightning bolt. I don't think Sasuke has ever achieved a Raikiri, but then again, the difference may be entirely in naming, and they are both the same jutsu. Also, yes, Sasuke and Kakashi power up differently, although i don't recall if it's technique based, or if they just have their own 'style'. I'll definitely be poking around the anime/manga I have to see what there is to say about Chidori vs Raikiri.
artemis of isles chapter 4 . 7/1/2005
Hi, there, glad to see you writing fanfics again. Did you meet your book's deadline?

Are you off Harry potter now? I've left it alone for quite a while. Now I'm into photographing and nonsense poems.
Leihko chapter 3 . 7/1/2005
I love this
Shinji-Higurashi chapter 3 . 6/30/2005
Good story keep it up
Lady Nagome of the West chapter 3 . 6/30/2005
Freakin' awesome! Still lovin' it! I'm actually keeping up with the dialogue, though I found the conversation between Kakashi, Jiraiya, and Tsunade confusing. Anywayz, can't wait for the next chapter! Laterz!
eternalsonata17 chapter 3 . 6/30/2005
I can see the future, This fic will be the best one on I love this story! Update Volume 2 right away!
GnawRogue16 chapter 3 . 6/30/2005
i like this Ino, she's very likeable. i really hope that you update again soon cause waiting for the next chapter is gonna be torture.
The Plothole chapter 3 . 6/29/2005
Man, I have to say that this was one of the most enjoyable stories I have read to date. It's great seeing another character understand and sympathize with such Naruto, and you really characterized Ino especially well. Well done, I am waiting in rapt anticipation for Volume 2.
Morgri chapter 3 . 6/29/2005
Great story, I'm enjoying it very much so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
JohnnyG chapter 3 . 6/29/2005
This is a great story. Keep up the excellent work.

Best,

~JohnnyG
allin656 chapter 3 . 6/29/2005
Well I like this story, and I'm hoping that you'll keep going on this story line. It's really interesting and I can't wait to read some more.
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