Reviews for Training for the Job
Hououza chapter 3 . 6/29/2005
Excellent story.

love how you played this out, look forwards to seeing what you have planned for volume 2.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
Chocobaby chapter 3 . 6/29/2005
Great chapter! XD

I like how you write Ino's respect towards Naruto. And how Sakura's mum accept Naruto but not others! XD

Can't wait for more!
Citan chapter 3 . 6/29/2005
Great... another NaruSaku... authors should write more NaruSaku fics. Good short fic(?). I especially like the length of the chapters(i like long chapter lengths) and the quick updates. Could easily be made NaruIno... too bad. Looking forwrard to the next "volume" since that wasn't covered in the manga.
DarkRonin101 chapter 3 . 6/29/2005
Good Update. The thing with Ino blowing up in her parents face was something that I have not seen often and found it interesting. Sakura's mom defending Naruto was interesting as well. But I got one question, isn't the CHIDORI and RAIKIRI the same move but different names. CHIDORI is the original name and the RAIKIRI was the nickname for the move since Kakashi sliced through a bolt of lighting with a CHIDORI.
Aaron Nowack chapter 3 . 6/29/2005
Not bad. Keep up the good work.
Chocobaby chapter 2 . 6/28/2005
Great story so far! XD

Poor POOR Naruto! T_T

Can't wait for more!
nightmares of death chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
this is a GREAT story, i love it allready
Lady Nagome of the West chapter 2 . 6/27/2005
Freakin'awesome! I'm loving this story already! This is the first I have read a description of Ino's ability. I cried a little when I read the part of how people treated Naruto as a little kid. But the show must go on. Anywayz, can't wait for the next chapter! Laterz!
MingShun chapter 2 . 6/27/2005
This is really good. But I kinda took things literally when Ino was trying to figure out why Naruto had lied. I had to read that passage several times before I realized that Sasuke wasn't killed by Naruto.
Hitokiri Jotham chapter 2 . 6/27/2005
ARGH! #! NO NARUINO21#$ #$ $#! !

Just kidding.

I'm a NaruSaku person, but also a NaruIno person. HAHA wow. Either way, if you change your mind, I'm happy. D

Update Quickly!
maxhrk chapter 2 . 6/27/2005
I love your story, it is interesting in matter of fact.
trent chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
could you make it naru/ino story better or reado this story with naruto ino please dude or dudette
Alulain P chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
love it update soon
Hitokiri Jotham chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Looking good so far.

update soon!
Smiter chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
I like this. _

This is certainly a very interesting start. Already, my imagination is racing on how Ino will react when she uncovers Naruto's big secret and sees the battle!

I'm also glad to see this is a Naruto/Sakura. :D I am a big fan of that pairing, and it is excellent to see a fic leading on from after the Naruto vs Sasuke fight. I have also written a fic like that, but it is in the process of rebuilding.

Your writing is nice and solid, which is good to see, and you have already introducted a few interesting plot hooks e.g. Naruto's secret, Sakura and Ino finding out the truth about Sasuke, Gaara's interest in Naruto.

This is definitely one to watch. _ I look forward to seeing more!
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